Aero vs Dominate - DOM WINS

DynamiCz · 03-03-2019, 07:20 PM

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead

Nice opener

You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses

I think this personal was well put together

You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1

Ehh, think the wording here a little out of place

Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag

Ok, think the concept was nice, but the execution lacked abit

15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside

Lol this was fire imo

You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever

Nice again

But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has

Didn't to much feel this one

I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings

Ehhh, very light hit

This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning

Nice

Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes

This is a miss only cause it kinda like your almost making a statement in there, with no punch executed

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We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me

Lol funny & fiya

She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee

Nice hit again here and very current

Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew

I like this, solid wording too

I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade

Light on the execution here

Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture

Didn't to much like this one

That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay

Lol Nahhh Aero

Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate

This is nice, picking back up

Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude

Light jab here, could have set it up to hit way better

Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!

Nahhh

This was a good read here, took me a couple reads, but I got to go with Dom with at least being more consistent. Both had fiya highlights, but Aero started drifting near the end which his misses came off lower then Dom misses. Good shit props to both

V-Dom

03-03-2019, 07:20 PM	#14
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead Nice opener You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses I think this personal was well put together You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1 Ehh, think the wording here a little out of place Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag Ok, think the concept was nice, but the execution lacked abit 15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside Lol this was fire imo You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever Nice again But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has Didn't to much feel this one I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings Ehhh, very light hit This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning Nice Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes This is a miss only cause it kinda like your almost making a statement in there, with no punch executed --------- We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me Lol funny & fiya She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee Nice hit again here and very current Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew I like this, solid wording too I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade Light on the execution here Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya? I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture Didn't to much like this one That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay Lol Nahhh Aero Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate This is nice, picking back up Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude Light jab here, could have set it up to hit way better Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?! Nahhh This was a good read here, took me a couple reads, but I got to go with Dom with at least being more consistent. Both had fiya highlights, but Aero started drifting near the end which his misses came off lower then Dom misses. Good shit props to both V-Dom __________________ ...ThA New ErA...