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03-03-2019, 11:30 AM
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Sinacog, the concepts are there sometimes but always lost in wierd wording. Shia, the space and butterfly lines are cool and your DLC/plank concepts are good but lacking in execution. The harden thing was well put together but a basic idea.
You mean Rolf, not Raul, and Plank was friends with Johnny anyway. If you're not sure, Google it before writing the bar. Shia Last edited by Sharp; 03-03-2019 at 03:24 PM. |
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