Edgar AlPo vs Rawn MacDon (S&F) - RAWN WINS 7-5

BROKE LESNAR · 06-10-2013, 11:21 AM

Rawn:

Who can doubt the human mouth of Wolfram Alpha
Cloaked in a tunic shroud concealing the proud mood of Bowser
Drinking coolant out the spout of a moving mountain
Looking down, awaiting a cruel calculative ghoulish outcome
Eating scallions over cow tongue; sigma 6 black belt – Malcrum
Reducing towns down to talcum, a plague in days without sun
Move about breaking the rules of sound with loud lungs
Tetra 3 Crowcon, detection methods present and outdone

^This entire segment was powerful. Really dominant stretch, imo. It read incredibly smooth and compelled me to quote it in its entirety before even finishing the piece.

Edgar:

it's the 4 door Carrera chauffered...the terrorist novice
my heatseakers could knock the chill off a pinguin while he weathers the solstice
pen resonantes with atonements, I'm beckoning opponents
with weapons and explosives
set to detonate with a nose flick and a featherweight control switch

^Nice. Very nice. The sheer arrogance that concluded these 2 bars was chilling. Liked it alot.

Overall I felt Rawn took this on consistency. He maintained a great stretch while Edgar started out brilliantly but unfortunately trailed off afterwords.

V-Rawn

06-10-2013, 11:21 AM	#5
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Rawn: Who can doubt the human mouth of Wolfram Alpha Cloaked in a tunic shroud concealing the proud mood of Bowser Drinking coolant out the spout of a moving mountain Looking down, awaiting a cruel calculative ghoulish outcome Eating scallions over cow tongue; sigma 6 black belt – Malcrum Reducing towns down to talcum, a plague in days without sun Move about breaking the rules of sound with loud lungs Tetra 3 Crowcon, detection methods present and outdone ^This entire segment was powerful. Really dominant stretch, imo. It read incredibly smooth and compelled me to quote it in its entirety before even finishing the piece. Edgar: it's the 4 door Carrera chauffered...the terrorist novice my heatseakers could knock the chill off a pinguin while he weathers the solstice pen resonantes with atonements, I'm beckoning opponents with weapons and explosives set to detonate with a nose flick and a featherweight control switch ^Nice. Very nice. The sheer arrogance that concluded these 2 bars was chilling. Liked it alot. Overall I felt Rawn took this on consistency. He maintained a great stretch while Edgar started out brilliantly but unfortunately trailed off afterwords. V-Rawn