Shia Labruh vs Sinacog - SHIA WINS

Ryno · 02-27-2019, 08:05 AM

Sinacog: Definitely one of your better verses. There were a few things I liked. Dating website and mr. Rodgers were decent. You use a lot of biblical references and occasionally repeat concept themes. Be more diverse. Keep elevating.

Shia LaBruh: You have the mechanics down. There were a few older ideas I wasn’t really a fan of. Tommy treatment, Soulja boy, plank were my favs. Sharpen up the wording would be my one critique. Not a bad drop.

Overall: Shia LaBruh wins. He had the stronger concepts.

02-27-2019, 08:05 AM	#1
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601594	Sinacog: Definitely one of your better verses. There were a few things I liked. Dating website and mr. Rodgers were decent. You use a lot of biblical references and occasionally repeat concept themes. Be more diverse. Keep elevating. Shia LaBruh: You have the mechanics down. There were a few older ideas I wasn’t really a fan of. Tommy treatment, Soulja boy, plank were my favs. Sharpen up the wording would be my one critique. Not a bad drop. Overall: Shia LaBruh wins. He had the stronger concepts.