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Old 02-15-2019, 07:27 PM   #9
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Body chase greats' coattails, you act like I'm prone to jealousy
I'm a precise shooter, don't need 6 for u to Catch the Steel like Brady's legacy.
...good...
you the face of the Street? it's getn stomped to the curb now
Heel 2 ur skull, the bad Guile flash kick u to the pavement in the 3rd Round
...nice, shoulda been 1rst round tho imo js...
if I clap rounds - black Talons. all the talkin you can fkn save it.
FIND urself in a Lake, deagle got u Running from the Birds like Anthony Davis
...good...
.22 in a loose sock, if u got me cornered I'm sparkin
Extendo in the boot, lil toy w/a whole lot of screamin like Chihuahua's barking
...not feeling...
oh you the Busting Melon type? Push Wigs and dead geeks!
BRODIE I'll bust on ur bitch melons and push that wig into ur bedsheets
...lol...
I'll scalp you with a bolo. &even out of range ur in danger
- scope w/a Fine Tune - 6 clicks away I'm Splitting Hairs with the laser.
...ehh, filler...

Vs

I’ve beaten him twice so even if the shotty miscues,
He's got enough on his plate & I don’t think he wants any more Body issues
...good...
U don’t sip sizzurp...u guzzle it until ur hand aches,
& that explains why the back of ur neck looks just like a stack of pancakes
...seen the concept and u coulda did it better imo. No miss but didnt hit...
Bro I’ll take ur bitch right after I let the chopper fire,
She let my ‘hand get so far between the walls’...I could pull out copper wire
...lol...
He’s a rat so I’m on the hunt like “Where his house at?”
I’ma snap & let this metal bang on his neck like he’s caught in a mouse trap
...blah...
U love suckin off vets...so watch as this shit gets gory,
I lick shots while ur ‘tongue is stuck on a pole’ like the kid in Christmas Story
...fuckin gun bars, this was clever tho. Good line...
This shotty...big as his body. How could I not rock it?
So when I give him food for thought...the slugs are bigger than a Hot Pocket
...ok for a gun bar...


Overall: body need to expand his horizons and quit using so many gun bars first and foremost. Shit gets old. To the verses, I thought bleak had a smoother read overall with the higher quality writing even tho body's opener was nice.



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