Incredible vs Ryno - RYNO WINS

[Jabari Black]

I crew w/ shooters, raise the ruger, dawg we lettin’ off shots at this nerd
My teams unstoppable once I bring the 5th out like a fkn boogie cousins return

(Yep I like this. Flowed well. Not a crazy flip but you crafted the punch well)

Hit ya block w/ the k, lil nigga ur the target but i'll hit ya team gladly
When the bullets ‘stray, cats’ in ya click'll scramble all throughout the alley

(The stray cats flip was cool but it’s light. You needed more to tie in to this for it to really land. Overall okay)

Wifey said ya stroke is horrid, im floored, ya skills in bed get no respect
Heard ya bitch can’t 'standpipe', but I’ve got an extension that’ll gladly get her wet

(This is dope. I like the stand pipe flip. Good wording in the set up - set this punch up well. The punch was worded even better. Extensions get her wet is clever and the double meaning is perfect. Only critique is you prob coulda did something small in the set up to let folks know you were bout to transition the punch to a gun bar cus it took a second for this to click. This is very nice though)

Picture this, for the cash ill hit ya team w/ the clip, dumpin’ at all foes
I’ll snap & spread ya faces in a flash... dawg this ain’t ur typical hood pose

(This one was somewhere between a miss and okay to me. The pic/flash concept is overused and pretty elementary imo. I might be missing the punch but spread your faces in a flash is an awkward phrase. Your writing is polished though and makes this enjoyable even though the punch didn’t land)

Im sick when im bussin, say a word & ill end ya life like its nothin’
Start duckin’! Or get the arm raised to ya mouth like u were coughin in public

(Haha I’m surprised I haven’t heard this before. I like it. Worded crisp. Sick when I’m bussing a good tie in. Nice)



Rynos fat ass loves fast food, save my bullets for another head
I'll just wait for the chik-fil-a owner to pouch ur ass instead

(Lol here we go. Come on bruh)

Fgt hiding under an alias hoping we all say nice raps man
You ain't ready for war of the past fam, I got troops ready &&& I'm not a clash fan

(This woulda been good if his name was Clash. From my knowledge it isn’t though so this was pretty much a statement bar. I think it’s the right angle to take but you didn’t do anything with it)

Saw you edited out two bars, hopefully I don't dq'd for feeding
I got two bars with the handle at the end, that how I make the score evened

(This was almost good. Not a bad concept but the execution wasn’t there. Not sure where you were trying to go with “bars” but you needed something that works for the double meaning. You’d have to paint that picture in the set up but you coulda flipped it like a crowbar with a taped handle or something but it doesn’t work with how you used it. Good attempt but this missed)

Go ahead let out that aggression, Vent ur a la-who-s-er, ain't shit ur leading
A movie star, we saw you birthed a Ace, but u suck more than the tit ur squeezing

(This was another good attempt but the execution is really bad. Not sure why you stretched out loser like that - it just doesn’t help the punch at all. I see what you were going for with the word play but this was really just a mess from start to finish. Not a bad concept though)

Come on man beat inc? Naw not this alias rookie, go sit down &&& eat a cookie
Ur Mahomes I'm Brady so if I'm doing my final stretch guess who gettin the lookey

(Lol you started and ended on the same note. This was bad)


Rhyno takes this easily and this is borderline a body if we being honest. Not to be an asshole by Rhyno’s standpipe line was better than Inc’s whole verse.

Rhyno is good and his verses are getting stronger every week. You’re a few adjustments and a few concepts away from having verse of the week material.

Inc you’re progress moving in the wrong direction my guy. You’ve dropped much better material in the BAL. Gotta take your time with your verses and concept. We all expecting better material from you since you not balancing mod duties.

Anyways Rhyno took this clear as day.

Mvgt Rhyno