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Old 01-20-2019, 10:33 PM   #7
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Ok, I did my usual dissections and gave both a fair assessment. Sinacog's verse has potential, both in creativity as well as visual depth and attempts to pull one in but yet pushes on away with the force repetition of phrases such as the catharsis, as well as in other areas throughout. Not sure if this was on intentional but left me with a disconnect when I was initially being connected and this patterned occur several times throughout. Maximus on the other hand had a pattern but was consistent with his flex, he brought some interesting concepts but it seemed he didn't attempt to flex too hard. However I like the fact that he was attempting to guide the one into the story and did not draw me away from the topic at hand (nothing seemed as a reach imo). I have seen better from Max before but it was decently written.
Overall it was an ok battle, nothing to go gaga about. But due to Sin drawing me away several times and Max keeping me engaged, I'm giving it to Max.
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