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06-09-2013, 11:11 AM
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Don't believe the hype
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fresh positive concept here man, making this a breath of fresh air to read. had a strong cadence and a consistent flow which was strong and on point. Good addition to the OM section. lot's of introspection going on in these lines.
Loved this line: Could be a spiritual gift or coincidence that with each hit now improves his diligence truth to this. i'd say a spiritual gift indeed. we can't see em.
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