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Sinacog · 12-30-2018, 09:29 PM

This was a stylish drop :)..

It didn't get away from itself, as it secured good penmanship with good multi-syllabic rhymes. I enjoyed this love story you portrayed, was quite good. You're on your way to something here. Your style reminds of Twain or something, which is good. I enjoy your writing, as it reminds me of things. You have good imagery, and good rhyme scheme. Nice one here, man. Good work, keep dropping..

Return the feed? lol

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=139280

12-30-2018, 09:29 PM	#6
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	This was a stylish drop :).. It didn't get away from itself, as it secured good penmanship with good multi-syllabic rhymes. I enjoyed this love story you portrayed, was quite good. You're on your way to something here. Your style reminds of Twain or something, which is good. I enjoy your writing, as it reminds me of things. You have good imagery, and good rhyme scheme. Nice one here, man. Good work, keep dropping.. Return the feed? lol http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=139280