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Old 10-30-2018, 03:19 PM   #1
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I think you should trademark, copywrite or patent this flow. It's always the same, but it's always smooth and effortless and uniquely your own. It's dope to say the least.

Other than that .... I'm not sure what to say about this drop. I mean, I enjoyed it. It was good. It read like a memoir or a memory of a time, a girl, a life once lived.

Idk. I suppose I could break down all the haunting like imagery, the duality, polarity, how all your pieces consist of a ghostly muse or how the two characters always apear to be at odds with one another, yet complete each other at the same time. Almost like eternal soul mates searching for (and constantly separating from) one another throughout space and time.

Idk.

I like it though. Good write up, Black. Per usual.
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