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Old 10-15-2018, 07:17 PM   #7
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Lenox had something along the lines of what I fuck with, just fitting a bunch of rhymes into a brick of shit talking. Flow had more of a battle verse type two line attack lines with a few extra rhymes. The accent doesn't help either for me in a SnF battle, some of the slants made me go back to read.

Len had a couple cool lines here and a decent vibe throughout nothing felt out of place. I liked this piece I feel like you could do good if this became a bigger thing. SnF battles are some of my favorite

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