Mr. J vs Adonis[J wins]

John Dillinger · 10-14-2018, 09:17 PM

Adonis

This flowed nicely, the ass clap line was kinda homo unless I'm missing something. From 'flip that switch' to 'tied down by my genes' was dope but after that it got kinda gay-ish again. Try-ing line was cool but simple. Sentences in to a censorship was cool. Capsized bar was kind of confusing and the ending was kinda simple again

Mr. J

Opened alright. Pinky up line was ok but not worded the best. Staring back nervous bar was dope. Fat lady/noose bar was cool. Fallout line was meh. Jenga line was cool but coulda been better imo

I'ma go with J on this one. A lil more creative w/ his verse imo

10-14-2018, 09:17 PM	#8
John Dillinger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,112 Battle Record: 8-7 Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast Champed -Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 10281360	Adonis This flowed nicely, the ass clap line was kinda homo unless I'm missing something. From 'flip that switch' to 'tied down by my genes' was dope but after that it got kinda gay-ish again. Try-ing line was cool but simple. Sentences in to a censorship was cool. Capsized bar was kind of confusing and the ending was kinda simple again Mr. J Opened alright. Pinky up line was ok but not worded the best. Staring back nervous bar was dope. Fat lady/noose bar was cool. Fallout line was meh. Jenga line was cool but coulda been better imo I'ma go with J on this one. A lil more creative w/ his verse imo