Big Bolo vs Diablo[Diablo wins]

[Inno]

Diablo

Crisp as as always my dude. The clean diction and phrasing was on point. Nice little flip on s current even aswell. Andvthough it was about plot and it had humor, yo managed to sneak in a message. At first glance it isn’t much but if you think about it, it’s profound. Honestly this was a breeze to read simply and to the point. It’s clearly. It one of your more complex pieces but I feel like your wording and crisp flow got you where you wanted to be. Thanks for the read as always lars.

Bolo

Nice concept first off. You attempted to keep a theme going through out and at first you where doing well. Towards the middle you seem to get lost in the concept and start to repeat things to keep the concept cohesive instead of introducing a new angle to your insight. I enjoyed this verse and on its own it’s a good piece. Against diablo not so much, falls short of your opponents prowess. After all the talk I was expecting much more but I appreciate the effort you put in broski, to bad you signed out. Thanks for the read.

Diablo wins