Round 1: 1. Jabari Black (14-4) vs 16. Witty (3-2) - JB WINS

Blue Bayou · 09-17-2018, 05:44 PM

Cool battle, looks like im gunna be in the minority here but i liked Witty more here tbh

JB - Pretty cool for a chopper flip but the concept is pretty dated...'waving on ya roof' was a cool metaphor but his roof? roof of his mouth okay maybe but that's not how it was delivered and calling his head a "roof" is a stretch imo & made the concept seemed like a reach & ineffective to me ... i like the meta for what it is but it doesn't work

Witty - set-up a bit stetched but was effective & it was a cool nameplay / current event punch.. tbh i loved the way it was delivered, good swag on the 'if you've got a stranglehold on this bitch'.. clever & worked well

Ive got Witty here

09-17-2018, 05:44 PM	#10
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	Cool battle, looks like im gunna be in the minority here but i liked Witty more here tbh JB - Pretty cool for a chopper flip but the concept is pretty dated...'waving on ya roof' was a cool metaphor but his roof? roof of his mouth okay maybe but that's not how it was delivered and calling his head a "roof" is a stretch imo & made the concept seemed like a reach & ineffective to me ... i like the meta for what it is but it doesn't work Witty - set-up a bit stetched but was effective & it was a cool nameplay / current event punch.. tbh i loved the way it was delivered, good swag on the 'if you've got a stranglehold on this bitch'.. clever & worked well Ive got Witty here __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip