LIGHTNING ROUND: Big Bolo (2-2) vs. John Dillinger (1-1) - JD WINS

DynamiCz · 08-27-2018, 08:25 PM

Parents sayin "u got a problem johnny the first step is admitting it's true"
Instead of helpin I left him for the wknd at Bernies, now he's enjoying the view

This was ok here, I think you could have worded a little better to hit harder with the execution. Decent at best tho

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Your wifey told me you a bitch, but you see I'll leave her tired, thirsty
Left her crib with 25 Marks on my back, closest you've come to that is a McGwire jersey

This was ok, concept kinda played out tho, decent at best here

Props, I think both ends could have did better....I got JD here, his concept was played, but he still executed his bar much better then Bolo.

V-JD

08-27-2018, 08:25 PM	#7
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	Parents sayin "u got a problem johnny the first step is admitting it's true" Instead of helpin I left him for the wknd at Bernies, now he's enjoying the view This was ok here, I think you could have worded a little better to hit harder with the execution. Decent at best tho ----------- Your wifey told me you a bitch, but you see I'll leave her tired, thirsty Left her crib with 25 Marks on my back, closest you've come to that is a McGwire jersey This was ok, concept kinda played out tho, decent at best here Props, I think both ends could have did better....I got JD here, his concept was played, but he still executed his bar much better then Bolo. V-JD __________________ ...ThA New ErA...