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Old 08-27-2018, 10:03 AM   #1
John Dillinger
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u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather
I wasn't around for this personal but I assume his grandfather was/is a racist? if so, decent tie in
every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???
Candle lighters? this is cool if thats what you were going for
things bout to get Harry. gonna wish u saw the NBL and swiped left
can’t be sirius black. Jabari may “mean dog” but that phrase only describes des
Kinda a self hype bar here, its cool but not a big hit
his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges
Not bad
this is the end of urself, kid. des isn’t one to be dealt with
u didn’t just bite off more than u could chew... ur fucking leaving with zelph lips
Alright
& maybe you’ll get low when u see me pull up in the rental...
...but u still getting fucked with 17 shots like u was Asia Argento
Cool closer

Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/
I like it
Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/
Liking this too
Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/
Nice
Don’t give a fuck if you like gun bars. I rap bout shit you ain’t been through/
So many gun shots growing up...bitch I got tired of hearing sticks too/
didn't hit too hard
Child on the way but heard you loss one. Ks out...if this man step, I’ll pop one/
The stick in ya mouth will help ya child meet his dad like ancestry dot com/
this was dope but it could have rhymed better
I’ll do you in the worse way! You’ll be on life support when I burst Ks/
Ironic how the ‘machine’ keeping u alive...​but thats what got you there in the first place/
Cool

Both had some nice punches, Des had a good drop, just had Jabari coming with a more consitent verse with a couple more hard hitters

v/Jabari
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