Week 10: John Dillinger (0-1) vs. bleak (5-4) - JD WINS

Jabari Black · 08-25-2018, 02:02 PM

Solid battle here. JD had a solid line. Pretty funny. The name flip was pretty slick. Only critique is the “only time she yell (insert name” lines arent too unique but you did it well. Slick line.

Bleak your bar was good as well imo. Concept was dope, I think execution let you down a bit. ‘John’s Heart’ is pretty good imo. Prob went over heads a bit but it works both ways. Rae is an issue would have been a cool tie in, but it doesn’t really tie in to anything. Overall I think you had the better idea but JD had the better execution.

This ones a lot closer than the votes imo but I gotta go with JD

MVGT JD

Sn: Bleak ive googles like your past 3 bars so that I can vote fairly. Idc if you google or not, but don’t be an asshole about it lol. Good work though my nigga.

08-25-2018, 02:02 PM	#13
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Solid battle here. JD had a solid line. Pretty funny. The name flip was pretty slick. Only critique is the “only time she yell (insert name” lines arent too unique but you did it well. Slick line. Bleak your bar was good as well imo. Concept was dope, I think execution let you down a bit. ‘John’s Heart’ is pretty good imo. Prob went over heads a bit but it works both ways. Rae is an issue would have been a cool tie in, but it doesn’t really tie in to anything. Overall I think you had the better idea but JD had the better execution. This ones a lot closer than the votes imo but I gotta go with JD MVGT JD Sn: Bleak ive googles like your past 3 bars so that I can vote fairly. Idc if you google or not, but don’t be an asshole about it lol. Good work though my nigga.