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My new gun'll catch a body. I’m up in ATL just to spray son
U’ll see the Hawk on ur chest Sooner than later...nigga this Trae Young alright But if we’re talking drive-bys...then I got ur head in my range So I’ma roll up & put a 'nickel in ur mug' cuz ur life is begging for change decent here, old concept with a decent flip My burner will send rounds down ur lane w/a bowler handle So if sun rolls up...then I’ma let him 'absorb more heat' than a solar panel damn, fire U smelled the belt for a week but that'll all be a blur soon To me a shipment...putting u in a hearse & scent in a box like perfume nahhh Shit, if ‘Dy rolls’...it’ll be an execution cuz my straps realer This stick will push ur shit back to the end of the table like a craps dealer lol cool Put up ur wifey in a bet. Cuz if u really wanna battle, fuck it By nightfall, she’ll be howling as I’m ‘doggin the walls’ like a shadow puppet ok here I got my arm extended to ur throat...nigga, ur soul’s mine After '2 clips leave him hanging by a thread' like he ran into my clothesline pretty cool I’m taking bets & ur waving the white flag. Boy, u'll die first Cuz we know where everybody’s Cashius...& it’s nowhere near Diverse mmm I tried liking it but just couldn’t Stick bigger than ur family tree. It’ll clap till ur dome is blown I’ll plant miCz & put his seeds in the air like the Bird Lady in Home Alone wow hella creative I actually loved this lol plant mix, his seeds, nice Flow, JB & now Dy...I left all these niggas dead from the mag I’m like a vendor collectin coins how I’m leaving w/ all these heads in a bag mmmm nah 4 nice 2 ok 1 Decent 3 misses Vs Lets stop the jiving...Jabari Black name flips kept you surviving When i flip somethin! The machine lift body in the air--Indoor skydiving nice You gotta prove me! All my friends dead when i slide this Lil Uzi When i give a couple clips inside the whip, it ain't a Drive In Movie i liked the first line better than the second lol pretty cool Never forget! When i carry the stick, don't even question legit I get to aiming the shit....that mean the gun on body like a weapon permit dope! The nina bad as a model..I fire! The bullet cooking out the knozzle This light ain't for charcoal! I'll have his top red like a Kingsford bottle mmm decent at best for me AR hang like a midget down my calf! I keep the pole low like Ralph Gun butt...leave body structure in dents like i started a paragraph the problem here is that in America, Ralph is pronounced “rall-fff”, miss Im in the streets..State Trooper! See you in traffic..i will shoot ya Spot his 2 door..an lean the can over the sunroof like the Redbull Mini Cooper alright cool & creative Glad you made it this far! I take the hostage route when i plug a star Big ass rope....that u'll pull bodies across the surface like tug of war decent I can spot BS a mile away...lurker! Watching Phone Booth helped this murder In the window with a sniper...looking through more scopes then a biolab worker ok here U'll need a eulogy! Big bully...right before he die im snatching his jewelry The laser tag him...when i flash lights in the building like mall security lol ok You see what im holding..looking like a medieval knight when im strolling The blade come out in the shop! I let it chop body down like the car stolen! pretty cool 5 nice 2 ok 2 Decent 1 Miss Close ass battle and a close one. Both finished the season off strong and definitely worth the read. More people should be voting on this but yeah I’m glad this shit happened. Body came nice with solar pane and home alone being my favorite lines, especially that home alone one lol fuckin fire. DynamiCz came a tad more turnt up than body did imo, having more lines that hit and less misses. Indoor skydiving and weapon permit were my favorites. Close call here and really took a lot of debate and rereads for me to pick a winner but I have DynamiCz taking it with more hitters and less misses. Could definitely go either way and will for sure be neck to neck. Dope battle fellas. Vote DynamiCz Last edited by For Battling; 08-20-2018 at 05:11 AM. |
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I got Body, wording seemed more crisp in a way, less misses for me personally, and he had my fav bar.
Body Nickel, begging Solar panel Crap dealer Home Aloen Opener slash closer was dece but not heavy hitting Dynam Opener was dece but like Body’s not heavy to me 2nd bar was good but I’ve seen drive in movie plays Weapons Permit Bio lab Worker It’s by a hair and def could go either way. Let’s get some votes guys V/Body Last edited by DMS; 08-18-2018 at 05:26 PM. |
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props on getting to the Finals guys, ill prob be a little more crictal then normal as its a final, and try and be more thorough....
My new gun'll catch a body. I’m up in ATL just to spray son U’ll see the Hawk on ur chest Sooner than later...nigga this Trae Young okay, so the okhlahoma & trey/trae tie-ins helps here, because otherwise this is not much diff then "put the heat to ur chest like a wade jersey" circa 2005. Overall, the flips were enjoyable in this, but its bare bones are pretty dated. 7/10 But if we’re talking drive-bys...then I got ur head in my range So I’ma roll up & put a 'nickel in ur mug' cuz ur life is begging for change hmmm, nah.. outside of the Nickle being more current nowadays wth all the gun lines, this whole idea is very payed and pretty basic imo... mug & change ideas here been done, this is a miss for me 4/10 My burner will send rounds down ur lane w/a bowler handle So if sun rolls up...then I’ma let him 'absorb more heat' than a solar panel okay, old wordplay flipped enjoyable into a gun bar that's decent, another heat idea so not crazy fresh here, its similar to my tesla bar grid i did earlier in the year so maybe that's why this isn't a real banger of a flip to me personally.. it lands tho, bowler handle / lane was a bit of a corny multi add in imo 7/10 U smelled the belt for a week but that'll all be a blur soon To me a shipment...putting u in a hearse & scent in a box like perfume pretty cool misdirection bar, I like the idea but personally this is brought down as to me this is like the 4th bar in a row there's a very played wp & flip involved with sent/scent.. I like the attack angle here but again this is the 4th bar that's a flip in nature with rehashed wordplay, 6/10 Shit, if ‘Dy rolls’...it’ll be an execution cuz my straps realer This stick will push ur shit back to the end of the table like a craps dealer niiice, I like this one... dope idea, at first I wasn't feelin the 'push ur shit' part of the punch, but tbh its fine with the nameplay tie in in the set-up... cool nameplay and bar 8/10 Put up ur wifey in a bet. Cuz if u really wanna battle, fuck it By nightfall, she’ll be howling as I’m ‘doggin the walls’ like a shadow puppet hahaha, tbh this is dope imo... haven't seen this idea b4, was fresh, funny and creative imo ... 9/10 I got my arm extended to ur throat...nigga, ur soul’s mine After '2 clips leave him hanging by a thread' like he ran into my clothesline cool attack line but again the bare bones of this bar and wordplay has been done a lot of times... I like the flip here, but again its another clips flip that has been done for years... I like the flip, but im now wowed as it's not the fresehest.. 6/10 I’m taking bets & ur waving the white flag. Boy, u'll die first Cuz we know where everybody’s Cashius...& it’s nowhere near Diverse this was cool, I dig the site play here and this was a good tie into the diverse punch, cool swag, solid bar 7/10 Stick bigger than ur family tree. It’ll clap till ur dome is blown I’ll plant miCz & put his seeds in the air like the Bird Lady in Home Alone lotaaa home alone bars on this site recently geeze lol... for a family/seeds idea this is pretty cool... imagery is good and the wordplay involved is cool 8/10 Flow, JB & now Dy...I left all these niggas dead from the mag I’m like a vendor collectin coins how I’m leaving w/ all these heads in a bag ehh closer, heads/coins is really played, and the 'in a bag' flip touching on old victories wasn't enough of an impactful flip imo... 5/10 Overall - Pretty cool verse. I really liked the shadow puppets line, the way u incorporated a lot of tie ins was cool & u had good wording throughout, however the verse as a whole was too flip heavy imo... u executed a lot of them well so props, but this wasn't a verse that wowed me with freshness if you know what I mean... Overall a great showing, and props on your season vs. Lets stop the jiving...Jabari Black name flips kept you surviving When i flip somethin! The machine lift body in the air--Indoor skydiving okay pretty cool attack line open, tie ins were good and I haven't seen the machine lift body / indoor sky diving idea.. 7/10 You gotta prove me! All my friends dead when i slide this Lil Uzi When i give a couple clips inside the whip, it ain't a Drive In Movie ehhhh, not really liking this one. clipse/clipse been done to death in relation to how you tried to us eit here, in the whip not a storng enough flip to make this any beter then dece at best imo, 5/10 Never forget! When i carry the stick, don't even question legit I get to aiming the shit....that mean the gun on body like a weapon permit okay okay pretty cool Bdy np again here, orked well as an attack line an the wording was good... pretty nice, not wowing but good 7/10 The nina bad as a model..I fire! The bullet cooking out the knozzle This light ain't for charcoal! I'll have his top red like a Kingsford bottle hmmm , decent meta... its fresh and the light for charcoal tie in was solid, coolish 6/10 AR hang like a midget down my calf! I keep the pole low like Ralph Gun butt...leave body structure in dents like i started a paragraph lol at the set-up, midget down my calf was funy, pole low like ralph was a horrible and very nnewbish way to go about it tho imo lol, and unless ur british it in no way rhymes so I cant give u the benefit of the doubt... anyways, this was a solid enough indent flip, punch overall is light tho imo, if u gun butt his forhead for example, the tie to body structure is kinda weak... this was ight as I like the meta 6/10 Im in the streets..State Trooper! See you in traffic..i will shoot ya Spot his 2 door..an lean the can over the sunroof like the Redbull Mini Cooper lol, this was cool... good creativity and for another "vehicle tied-in gun bar" this was pretty well done.. 8/10 Glad you made it this far! I take the hostage route when i plug a star Big ass rope....that u'll pull bodies across the surface like tug of war ehh ur multi's are bugging me man haha, aren't u American? anyways star and war doesn't work, that small issue aside the punch is light imo, not too impactful for another 'Body" play and ive seen better tug of war lines... 5/10 I can spot BS a mile away...lurker! Watching Phone Booth helped this murder In the window with a sniper...looking through more scopes then a biolab worker okay another what I would call "light" im going to shoot you ideas that come off soft as the essence of the punch is ur looking through multiple lenses... that aside, I actually don't recall too many scope/lab ideas in my day, the actual meta is decent... 6/10 U'll need a eulogy! Big bully...right before he die im snatching his jewelry The laser tag him...when i flash lights in the building like mall security lol, coolish meta... while I can appreciate this is ur "style", bar after bar of off-handed attack lines & gun refs it is getting a bit redundant if im being honest... this is a funny and cool meta tho so props for that 7/10 You see what im holding..looking like a medieval knight when im strolling The blade come out in the shop! I let it chop body down like the car stolen! pretty cool 'body' nameplay here... cant recall this idea being used on him... good imagery here, like it 7/10 Overall - Pretty solid verse throughout with some cool new attack ideas, but def a few misses imo & I feel you were a little more in direct then you usually are with your gun bars / attack ideas if you know what I mean... Overall you've had a great season with some dope gun punches, this will prob be close Body - 67 Dyna - 64 Really close... if my math is wrong someone let me know haha, props to you both and pretty solid showings here, and on reaching the finals ... I really think u could both benefit from maybeeee trying some personals, girl dissses, I dunno something where the verse is only 60-70% gun lines haha, but hey that's prob just me.. good shit guys Vote - BodySnatcher
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My new gun'll catch a body. I’m up in ATL just to spray son
U’ll see the Hawk on ur chest Sooner than later...nigga this Trae Young I fk w/ this, dope But if we’re talking drive-bys...then I got ur head in my range So I’ma roll up & put a 'nickel in ur mug' cuz ur life is begging for change coo My burner will send rounds down ur lane w/a bowler handle So if sun rolls up...then I’ma let him 'absorb more heat' than a solar panel I felt the sun/son wp added to the punch if anything, fire U smelled the belt for a week but that'll all be a blur soon To me a shipment...putting u in a hearse & scent in a box like perfume thought u were going to go a diff way on this one, decent imo Shit, if ‘Dy rolls’...it’ll be an execution cuz my straps realer This stick will push ur shit back to the end of the table like a craps dealer hmmm.. push ur shit back threw me off for a second but this was coo Put up ur wifey in a bet. Cuz if u really wanna battle, fuck it By nightfall, she’ll be howling as I’m ‘doggin the walls’ like a shadow puppet thought this was creative, nice I got my arm extended to ur throat...nigga, ur soul’s mine After '2 clips leave him hanging by a thread' like he ran into my clothesline ok I’m taking bets & ur waving the white flag. Boy, u'll die first Cuz we know where everybody’s Cashius...& it’s nowhere near Diverse I feel like people aren't catching the np here, this hit for me Stick bigger than ur family tree. It’ll clap till ur dome is blown I’ll plant miCz & put his seeds in the air like the Bird Lady in Home Alone fire, the seeds in the air/family tree tie in made it work for me, haven't seen plant mix either. Flow, JB & now Dy...I left all these niggas dead from the mag I’m like a vendor collectin coins how I’m leaving w/ all these heads in a bag eh, this is a miss for me Lets stop the jiving...Jabari Black name flips kept you surviving When i flip somethin! The machine lift body in the air--Indoor skydiving coo You gotta prove me! All my friends dead when i slide this Lil Uzi When i give a couple clips inside the whip, it ain't a Drive In Movie dope Never forget! When i carry the stick, don't even question legit I get to aiming the shit....that mean the gun on body like a weapon permit fk w/ it The nina bad as a model..I fire! The bullet cooking out the knozzle This light ain't for charcoal! I'll have his top red like a Kingsford bottle this came off a little light to me AR hang like a midget down my calf! I keep the pole low like Ralph Gun butt...leave body structure in dents like i started a paragraph bruh this coulda been doooope, the midget down my calf shit was tight but yea this doesn't rhyme for me so I can't give it a pass Im in the streets..State Trooper! See you in traffic..i will shoot ya Spot his 2 door..an lean the can over the sunroof like the Redbull Mini Cooper damn...heat right here Glad you made it this far! I take the hostage route when i plug a star Big ass rope....that u'll pull bodies across the surface like tug of war wording was a little off to me, decent here I can spot BS a mile away...lurker! Watching Phone Booth helped this murder In the window with a sniper...looking through more scopes then a biolab worker not feeling this one U'll need a eulogy! Big bully...right before he die im snatching his jewelry The laser tag him...when i flash lights in the building like mall security coo You see what im holding..looking like a medieval knight when im strolling The blade come out in the shop! I let it chop body down like the car stolen! fk w/ it Dope finals match fellas, I want to roll w/ Dy but after I few reads I'm not diggin' the biolab bar, and the paragraph/ralph shit didn't rhyme to me. The bar had mad potential, but I have body w/ 1 less miss. I thought Dy had lotb w/ that red bull ish, but body wasn't far behind w/ the solar panel bar. The only one I wasn't really feeling from Body was his closer. I get I'm not the text encyclopedia a lot of these heads are, so some of the concepts/wp that are played come off as fresh to me... but I wen't back and forth on this a couple times. Great read fellas, both deserving. v/ Body |
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