FINAL 4: Blue Bayou vs. DynamiCz DY WINS

BodySnatcher · 08-12-2018, 05:05 PM

a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling
this was cool assuming ur trying to predict his bars
you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game
again this cool...nice wordplay but not too harsh of a line
blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink..
leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink
lol whoa.... this ok
since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name..
when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign
ehh
attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone
dope
claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts..
you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back
ehh
kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned..
he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension
decent at best
tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults..
wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf
nice

Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom
dope
God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint
Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint
lol nice
I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda
It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta
slick
What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit
The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit
this alright
Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently
If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy
st8
Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver
Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire
cool bar
Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover
When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother
nah
I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin
rhyme scheme a tad off but this is st8

This is close. Blue went wordplay-heavy and I like your opener, trombone, and caddy bars but the rest wasn't up to the normal standard although that shrink line was wow. Dyn came with some harder lines(opener, police, magenta was fresh, wildfire was cool but some playedish/off worded concepts(policy, C murder). In the end, I'm going with Dyn for a more aggressive verse. Dope battle fellas.

08-12-2018, 05:05 PM	#16
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840899	a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling.. then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling this was cool assuming ur trying to predict his bars you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame.. so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game again this cool...nice wordplay but not too harsh of a line blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink.. leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink lol whoa.... this ok since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name.. when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign ehh attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home.. ‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone dope claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts.. you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back ehh kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned.. he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension decent at best tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults.. wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf nice Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom dope God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint lol nice I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta slick What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit this alright Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy st8 Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire cool bar Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother nah I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin rhyme scheme a tad off but this is st8 This is close. Blue went wordplay-heavy and I like your opener, trombone, and caddy bars but the rest wasn't up to the normal standard although that shrink line was wow. Dyn came with some harder lines(opener, police, magenta was fresh, wildfire was cool but some playedish/off worded concepts(policy, C murder). In the end, I'm going with Dyn for a more aggressive verse. Dope battle fellas. Last edited by BodySnatcher; 08-12-2018 at 11:18 PM.