Week 8: Chyeahhh!!! (4-4) vs. Killing Spree (5-3) - CHYEAH WINS

Jabari Black · 08-12-2018, 07:44 AM

Chyeahhh had a cool little flip. The concept was pretty good. The fact that the wp was separated out took away from the impact imo. It’s less difficult to come up with a word association line than if he was to just flip outright flip the phrase ‘silk the shocker’. As it was though the line was still pretty slick.

KS your concepts are dope, it’s just your bars feel very rushed a lot of the times. The concept was there but the execution wasn’t. Wp felt forced because by def felt like it could have worked with better wording.

I think Chyeahhh took this one pretty comfortably. Would have loved to see what KS coulda done if he took more time to craft out this punch.

Mvgt Chyeahhh

08-12-2018, 07:44 AM	#10
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Chyeahhh had a cool little flip. The concept was pretty good. The fact that the wp was separated out took away from the impact imo. It’s less difficult to come up with a word association line than if he was to just flip outright flip the phrase ‘silk the shocker’. As it was though the line was still pretty slick. KS your concepts are dope, it’s just your bars feel very rushed a lot of the times. The concept was there but the execution wasn’t. Wp felt forced because by def felt like it could have worked with better wording. I think Chyeahhh took this one pretty comfortably. Would have loved to see what KS coulda done if he took more time to craft out this punch. Mvgt Chyeahhh