Tell niggas be themselves and they nobody

Hush · 08-05-2018, 09:24 AM

Life’s a head scratcher
Can’t rewrite the book when ur on the tenth chapter
School of hard knocks head master
Playlist full of dead rappers
If I want it I visualize
Bumping notorious big hypnotize
Bad bitch all hips and thighs
Niggas bitch up switching Swides
Depression arise. I’m quick to sigh
New coupe switch the ride rims a different size
Can’t get close to a distant mind
Introvert .. time to dip and hide
Mind state re invent it
Crooked system .. bigger sentence
finger tips dollar scented
You are not authentic
Riding wit the carbon for the carbon copy’s
Ur story fake them scars been copied
Tell niggas be themselves and they nobody

sral · 08-05-2018, 04:28 PM

Low key fire, shame you don’t write more tbh.

Opening and closing lines were the best to me.

Felt it.

Keep that pen moving!

veritas · 08-06-2018, 07:05 AM

This would sound good rapped out loud. Well done, brother.

Hush · 08-06-2018, 09:18 AM

Word thx

ACTIVATE SELF · 08-06-2018, 08:25 PM

A body on the slick

Tough piece

PancakeBrah · 08-08-2018, 08:58 PM

I liked the dollar scent line. The whole thing was pretty clean.

Exis · 08-08-2018, 10:19 PM

Gotta echo Lars, your opener & closer were the best parts...no offense to the middle section tho as that was straight.

Stay nice with it.

dead man · 08-12-2018, 10:25 PM

Can’t rewrite the book when ur on the tenth chapter
School of hard knocks head master
Playlist full of dead rappers
If I want it I visualize

raw

Mind state re invent it
Crooked system .. bigger sentence
finger tips dollar scented
You are not authentic
Riding wit the carbon for the carbon copy’s

first 3 were great but whole thing was quotable

title and obviously closing line was a good draw, and actually could be extrapolated into something super interesting as well.

thanks

Geno · 09-05-2018, 10:35 AM

This shit fire homie.

Kenny · 09-06-2018, 09:58 PM

Dope piece harsh words could really feel does lines hahahaha good one!

Aero · 09-06-2018, 10:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kenny

Dope piece harsh words could really feel does lines hahahaha good one!

Who you

Kenny · 09-06-2018, 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero

Who you

Uhhh someone who likes to write words ... ??

neutral · 09-06-2018, 11:43 PM

average

08-05-2018, 09:24 AM	#1
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Tell niggas be themselves and they nobody Life’s a head scratcher Can’t rewrite the book when ur on the tenth chapter School of hard knocks head master Playlist full of dead rappers If I want it I visualize Bumping notorious big hypnotize Bad bitch all hips and thighs Niggas bitch up switching Swides Depression arise. I’m quick to sigh New coupe switch the ride rims a different size Can’t get close to a distant mind Introvert .. time to dip and hide Mind state re invent it Crooked system .. bigger sentence finger tips dollar scented You are not authentic Riding wit the carbon for the carbon copy’s Ur story fake them scars been copied Tell niggas be themselves and they nobody __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-05-2018, 04:28 PM	#2
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	Low key fire, shame you don’t write more tbh. Opening and closing lines were the best to me. Felt it. Keep that pen moving! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-06-2018, 09:18 AM	#4
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Word thx __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

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PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	I liked the dollar scent line. The whole thing was pretty clean. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

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dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Can’t rewrite the book when ur on the tenth chapter School of hard knocks head master Playlist full of dead rappers If I want it I visualize raw Mind state re invent it Crooked system .. bigger sentence finger tips dollar scented You are not authentic Riding wit the carbon for the carbon copy’s first 3 were great but whole thing was quotable title and obviously closing line was a good draw, and actually could be extrapolated into something super interesting as well. thanks __________________ Zack Wicks for president

08-08-2018, 10:19 PM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Gotta echo Lars, your opener & closer were the best parts...no offense to the middle section tho as that was straight. Stay nice with it.

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09-06-2018, 09:58 PM	#10
Kenny Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Dope piece harsh words could really feel does lines hahahaha good one!

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