LIGHTNING ROUND: bleak (5-2) vs. Killing Spree (4-3) - KS WINS

DynamiCz · 08-06-2018, 08:33 PM

u got lightweights riding you. If I'm close, you'll be spinning with gale force.
Flash from a bystander &the metal slide down the barrel like a carousel horse

This concept was actually ok, rhyme structure was coo, think you could have worded it around better and replace some words, but overall decent 1-2

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Bro Ur Main chick?...
Dropped this goon for bein a duck! We know this weak’ll get rocked
Bieksa top D player for tha King...1 Punch’ll have Ur face on ice & Mine in’a box

This was also a cool concept here imo, I had to read it a couple times as well to get what you was saying, but I got it and it hit for me here!

Overall props to both here, im edging this one to Spree. Only cause your line last week bleak with the carousel horse/carnival ride almost is the same simple concept. Would have won have you not used the carnival ride joint.

V-Spree

08-06-2018, 08:33 PM	#5
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	u got lightweights riding you. If I'm close, you'll be spinning with gale force. Flash from a bystander &the metal slide down the barrel like a carousel horse This concept was actually ok, rhyme structure was coo, think you could have worded it around better and replace some words, but overall decent 1-2 --------- Bro Ur Main chick?... Dropped this goon for bein a duck! We know this weak’ll get rocked Bieksa top D player for tha King...1 Punch’ll have Ur face on ice & Mine in’a box This was also a cool concept here imo, I had to read it a couple times as well to get what you was saying, but I got it and it hit for me here! Overall props to both here, im edging this one to Spree. Only cause your line last week bleak with the carousel horse/carnival ride almost is the same simple concept. Would have won have you not used the carnival ride joint. V-Spree __________________ ...ThA New ErA...