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Old 06-04-2013, 11:30 AM   #3
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Would be dope if you added the lyrics as well. I like to read while I listen to the shit even tho' I can hear the lyrics well. Easier to go back and quote shit that I felt stood out. The first verse was ill.

''Respects overdue, I was neglected and left alone till my dreams bury ya facts in another world set in stone.'' <-- dope ish.

I guess it's you on the second verse. The flow/rhymescheme was on point/dope and I'll bump this track from time to time. The I eat bars/Dahmer, Angel with Clip wings, Martyr shit, raising a bar, cold blooded, cave for the morgue-lines stood out to me. The weed-OD line was played and your only semi-weak shit with an OK enough twist imo.

Definately a dope track. Props.
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