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Old 07-07-2018, 10:50 PM   #1
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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.

Rhyme wise it's very iffy, the concept is alright though

I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops

This is pretty weak imo, the rhyme is better than the last bar but it's still slanted af. The concept itself, I don't understand.

My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.

Light but alright.

ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes

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Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/

Alright, pretty creative.

You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/

Lmao nice. Personal and funny

Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the Street Fighters bonus stage/

Nice.

Ya dome get sprayed. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/

Not nearly as original compared to other lines, but it's ok.
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Old 07-08-2018, 01:34 AM   #2
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V/ JB
Not gonna do a bar for bar or something.
Feel this ones pretty clear
Len had some misses for me,
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Old 07-08-2018, 02:11 PM   #3
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Not gonna do a bar for bar or something.
Feel this ones pretty clear
Len had some misses for me,
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Old 07-08-2018, 01:31 PM   #4
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Heads mangled. Eggs scrambled = rhyming is iffy?

Don’t vote on my shit ever again
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