Week 5: Chat and Predictions!!

[El Muffin]

Originally Posted by Incredible

The last part of that bar is the only personal part though. As you know I am no pro here and also respect you but that last little snippet to me wasn't enough to carry the bar alone. The rest of it was just woo rah to me. So your kind of contradicting yourself here, a little. My opinion on that.

ummm no ...simmer down grasshopper

that is what we call a misdirection. the setup is click click bang used ONE way

and the punch is the same phrase used entirely different

its still a punch

its not just saying hey my niggas got guns . we strapped coz we dont wanna pay a fine

ITS SIMPLE

if u want to see another example of the bar i used that you are critiquing? look at my closer in the lyric olympics against blue

deep blue sea

deep blue, see

..you are wrong..
YET again

[sral]

Originally Posted by El Muffin

ummm no ...simmer down grasshopper

that is what we call a misdirection. the setup is click click bang used ONE way

and the punch is the same phrase used entirely different

its still a punch

its not just saying hey my niggas got guns . we strapped coz we dont wanna pay a fine

ITS SIMPLE

if u want to see another example of the bar i used that you are critiquing? look at my closer in the lyric olympics against blue

deep blue sea

deep blue, see

..you are wrong..
YET again

personally I hate that shit because of the comma that's needed to make it work

it's forced to me