FGR vs. GKillaZ - {FGR wins}

Swerve · 06-01-2013, 02:11 PM

It isn't swaying in my opinion, but it would get called swaying by a number of people. Hush didn't get one of my lines before (spic) and then when I explained it to him, I got accused of swaying.

As for this battle, it was pretty clear that FGR took it. He had an actual verse with concepts and punches, while Kill had statementish stuff. GKill, you gotta focus on coming up with creative ideas that people havent seen yet when you're text battling. Wordplay, metaphors, similes, etc, get a lot of love here because they are the tools of writing that make people think and show ability. Either way, keep it up.

V/ FGR

06-01-2013, 02:11 PM	#17
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,874 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920327	It isn't swaying in my opinion, but it would get called swaying by a number of people. Hush didn't get one of my lines before (spic) and then when I explained it to him, I got accused of swaying. As for this battle, it was pretty clear that FGR took it. He had an actual verse with concepts and punches, while Kill had statementish stuff. GKill, you gotta focus on coming up with creative ideas that people havent seen yet when you're text battling. Wordplay, metaphors, similes, etc, get a lot of love here because they are the tools of writing that make people think and show ability. Either way, keep it up. V/ FGR __________________ No Cap Gang.