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At first I thought the opening lines seemed kinda dull, I guess I should have read it more carefully cuz I didn't really think about the shit you were saying, I was just reading it, hah. But your closure was dope as hell. Enjoyed your opener a lot more on the second read-through and the rest of your verse as well. Well crafted verse with no overly dramatic hocus pocus in terms of the lines. Easy, short and dope read. Keep it up MW.
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