WK4: El Muffin 1-2 vs. Jabari Black 1-2 - Jabari Black WINS!!

[Jabari Black]

Originally Posted by El Muffin

But yeah . in conclusion . pop an extenze n fuck her to oblivion .

I keep em on deck .

Been dope since ‘02 huh...

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/
Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/
U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/
The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/
You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/
U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/
You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/
Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’/

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

Been dope since ‘02 huh...

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/

not very hard, veru statementish and done to death

Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/

lmao this was brilliant

U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/

nah, i hate 'that' punches. When they work they are great but alot of the time.they come off like you had an angle but couldnt word it in. This was one.of them moments for me

The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/

could of been dope but you over did it. Vwry stretched when read outloud

You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/

light but ill give you it

U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/

i did an extense bar on him already. HoT finals so this was a played to me

You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/

mm yeah ok

Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’/

interesting idea

annoyed because that second bar was fire. Thats the sort or studf you should be doing reguarly. Some interestin ideas in here but overall i seen you do better an think muff probably going to come well enough to take this. Liked the use of your personals but they tough subjects so you could of been a lot nastier woth it for me. Anyway enjoyed the read an that second bar was LOLS.

Originally Posted by El Muffin

wasnt gona show but u hadda talk trash eh

fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
ok
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account
ok bit light
tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students
ok. All feel a bit like banked bars though bro
full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga
coo
open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class
meh
Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper
like the reference to the modified boot. Didnt like way you used this felt a bit corny tbh
I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining
lol liked this
Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process
nah
gunbars rfun thx

Ahh gunbars comment makes sense. Was all feeling rather banked an missin your usual rawness, deffo not your best but definately was consistent enough to take this as the more polished verse but blacks second bar was lotb for me.

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