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05-29-2018, 01:29 AM
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I’d quote this, but requoting the whole damn thing feels silly
The extended metaphor was cleanly carried until it changes, like the seasons. Off rhymes and inter playing rhyme schemes were silly good. Enjambent word choice on point. 10/10 will read several more times.
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