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Old 05-31-2013, 04:03 PM   #1
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How you goin to swim w the big fish when ya aint harmin guppies
A poet, a no name, the rapine, EndSane in King Narman's company
ATR's coming, sharks for the chuming, circling, starved and hungry
getting more rugged then carpet coverings, your hearts are nothing
truthfully, your crew is toluene, gassed and green as goose beans
this new breed is so very cautious and wary, Ingall's on the prairie
who will fall or get burried for daring to even brawl against Ares
Your obnoxious - only poppin amyl nitrate and paedestry cherries
You think you can contest big guns, with those derringer triggers
Stick ya neck out once and my klippel-feil like a harbinger's whisper
whom carries a hitlist, to apoplexi's like Natural's character witness
Code behaves like he got seroquil sickness, with hysterical bitch fits
his turgid weapons buisness aspiring spirochetes and slip discs
So when challenge week's missives, went unseen and not written
A submissive Sane assumed the position, decreeing his vision
forcing his appretence, Profet, to D- Creed, with cordial derision
Profet negated, Kwikwitit obliged serious enough Muff still aint arrive
After, Keith retreated from capture, he'd bleed out a battered tzar
a scarecrow Pharoah who lacks the heart for his alabaster jar

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Old 05-31-2013, 05:31 PM   #2
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Um wow.

Damn my dude. I think I need a PHD just to LOL at these

DOPE
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Old 05-31-2013, 05:38 PM   #3
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Yesterday I went up the stairs
I met a man who wasn’t there
He wasn’t there again today
I wish I wish he’d go away

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Old 06-01-2013, 02:02 AM   #4
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Not bad man but how this concern me Lol ya said my name but ain't throw shit at me. You just don't like dissin ya boy huh lmao
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Old 06-01-2013, 10:24 AM   #5
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Lol^

Werd though rawn, bringing them hits man.
dn pretty much slayed in text
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Old 06-01-2013, 10:17 PM   #6
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Lol. Your vocabulary has always been good but in some cases it IS also your weakness.
Its amazing you do audio, because the way you write 90% of the time i would have never guessed it.
Btw, you got some major improvements to do on your audios.
But who doesn't.

I suppose since i have not replied you win (humoring the idea i am even trying to compete(which i am not)). As disses go i don't think this was very good...and certainly not as good as endsanes diss to your stupid lil crew. He actually had personals and his punches were better. Granted, i am bias...he my crew member/homeboy but i think most of you cock riding bitches would agree if you all were to get honest and serious for a second and give credit where credit is due.

Have fun repping a name thats a lie. 1
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YOU GOT EM NATTY

YOU STROLLED IN, CALMLY INFORMED HIN OF YOUR SUPERIORITY, BRUSHED THE DIRT OFF YOUR PLEATED RED POWER SUIT, AND WALKED OUT WITH YOUR HEAD HELD HIGH

BRAVO


THAT JAB AT THE END

"HAVE FUN REPPING A NAME THATS A LIE"

SO CLEVER, YET DIGNIFIED

U REALLY SHOWED UR ABOVE THIS PETTY BULLSHIT

ANS ALSO SHOWED YOUR CAPACITY FOR WIT

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Old 06-02-2013, 02:09 AM   #8
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i don't think.."i got em" anymore than they "got me".
Nobody wins. You just have a bunch of ignorant fools thinking they have won something(excluding myself from that list).
Your sarcastic lil post there was no more witty than mine btw.
The difference being you were trying to be and i wasn't.
Lol
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Old 06-02-2013, 10:03 AM   #9
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What a fuckin loser.
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Old 06-02-2013, 12:05 PM   #10
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