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Old 04-17-2013, 12:56 AM   #1
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I don't even give a fuck, I just need to live it up.
Rhyme disease, I'm sick enough to die from these acidic cuts

A dime'll see this dick & suck til her lima bean is drippin stuff
Wise & C'll stick the guts. If its nice & clean I'll lick the butt
Designer sheets and frilly rugs, it’s finer things that women love
That’s why I keep my linens plush, to try and beat my inner thug

Her desire leaves my pickle buffed, iron meat to cripple sluts
Tigers need some different blood. Ciphen, drink, refill the cup.
Ill n such, we sick disgusting. Ghastly gross, we really something!
Packin flows that’s filthy trust me the antidotes ain’t killing nothing

Cancer grows w/filter sucking. Extract dope, we deal in substance
Post traumatic, back at home & still adjusting. Random hoes, milfs & blumpkins
Lasses know I’m hip to humpin, Casanova bit ya muffin
We have your cake and eat it too, got massive snakes like Beatlejuice

From flaccid state the wiener grew, the baddest babes can penis chew
I gravitate between a few: acid, yay, weed & shrooms
***tus ate & phoenix flew, with addict rage I fiend the booth
Advocate when evil's loose, Atlantis waves on evening news
Cannon aimed, the beast is loose, you can’t escape the evil truth
Gamma rays defeated you, I’m zappin playa’s. Pikachu

Planet shakes when drinking Goose. The flow's rare my pen ooze
It blows hair like wind do, the cold air'll get you
YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE I'VE BEEN LOU!!

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Old 04-17-2013, 10:43 AM   #2
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YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE I'VE BEEN LOU!? lol
This was fuckin dope you two. Both of you have damn near the exact same style so there was no stutters here whatsoever. When CP turned it over to WW the song kept rolling, and noone in the audience had any idea. (Two fight club references in one post, I'm going for a record). But there was really nothing negative I could say about this. Humorous in parts and nice vocab, flow, etc. Great piece you two.

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Old 04-17-2013, 11:36 AM   #3
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Dug what both of you did technically, flowed perfect and the rhymes were slick. Imagery was effective and funny, Wise was fuckin hilarious and Copy learned me with that pikachu line

Dope drop guys
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Old 04-20-2013, 10:25 PM   #4
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Old 05-31-2013, 02:00 AM   #5
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lol uppin this sickness
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Old 05-31-2013, 04:27 PM   #6
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I enjoyed this both styles compliment each other nicely
makes the whole thing a much more enjoyable read
pat came with his own pizzazz while why's took it a step further
this was a nice collab the beginning was cool
i think the mid section was my fave though..keep it up fellas
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Old 05-31-2013, 04:52 PM   #7
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I met a man who wasn’t there
He wasn’t there again today
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Old 06-01-2013, 11:50 AM   #9
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Hah, funny lil drop you got here. Enjoyed the set-ups as well. I did that 2 lines each thing with someone a couple years back, shit's cool to do and dope to read. Flowed well throughout. Keep it up.
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Old 06-01-2013, 12:54 PM   #10
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I was just about to browse the OM for a CopyPat verse and was stoked to stumble across this. Pat, your style has been amongst my favourite to read since I joined Netcees way back when and this piece was a prime example of why. Whys Ways, you kept pace with Pat in every step and are half the reason this turned out as fresh as it did.

Pat, you down to collab on some shit soon?
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Old 06-01-2013, 07:38 PM   #11
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Lol this was dope and very entertaining. Flow was smooth, stacked rhyme schemes, and overall really enjoyable/humorous content. Kinda derailed towards the end IMO, at least in terms of the bangin bitches part. In light of Wise's plumper misadventures surfacing, you guys should follow this up with a fat bitch edition. Dope shit, gentlemen.
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Old 06-04-2013, 02:26 PM   #12
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^ I railed the ever living shit outta her face so I wouldn't call it a "misadventure", lol.

Plus she has a cute face and big tits.
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Old 06-10-2013, 12:14 AM   #13
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