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05-22-2018, 02:08 PM
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This was dope, had me very intrigued.
I enjoyed 2trips critique of the piece as well, he's very invested in the characters u created here, lol. Anyways, thought it flowed fine, but the content was strong enough I didn't notice the wording issues Geno might have been talking about. Good shit, props. |
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