WK2: Incredible 0-1 vs. Jabari Black 0-1 - Jabari Black WINS!!

[Incredible]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 18th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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@Jabari Black

[Incredible]

10-12 is good for me.

[Jabari Black]

Check. 12

[Jabari Black]

Ext

[Jabari Black]

I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/
If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/
Ya son get his dome smashed in...got his head under my heel savage/
A curb stomp’ll have ya ‘kid face in the street’ like the cover of Illmatic/
I peel matics. You BAL’s leader’ til I start grippin MACs/
I’ll have the ‘liter shook’ with his insides oozing out when i twist his cap/
You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/
It can get much worse...I’ll put the guns down if you think you can scrap/
A hook from Black’ll lay em flat...It’s no tramp stamp when I put Inc on his back/

[Incredible]

You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni
Your only win was against a mental patient, your shit is out dated
You lack toasts and your style so spoiled I was just lucky to be the first to say it
So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling
I'm fingering that trigger, don't play now.....that slim body a squirter
Spread the eagle, I'll get it on film but I'm not talkin bout Yung MA being a director
Jabari means 'brave' I'm not really sure why they decided on that
I got tricks up my sleeve, fact....JB just more shook than a wizard without his hat
I got my hittas out all through the night & into the days
So when I say I got the kids looking for you they ain't involved in a fortnite craze

[zelti]

I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/
definitely a reach here, decent at best for me
If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/
ok this was pretty cool
Ya son get his dome smashed in...got his head under my heel savage/
A curb stomp’ll have ya ‘kid face in the street’ like the cover of Illmatic/
good
I peel matics. You BAL’s leader’ til I start grippin MACs/
I’ll have the ‘liter shook’ with his insides oozing out when i twist his cap/
nah wasn’t feeling this
You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/
hmm ok
It can get much worse...I’ll put the guns down if you think you can scrap/
A hook from Black’ll lay em flat...It’s no tramp stamp when I put Inc on his back/
decent


Vs



You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni
hmm Bit if a reach but decent
Your only win was against a mental patient, your shit is out dated
You lack toasts and your style so spoiled I was just lucky to be the first to say it
nah man, lack toasts /lactose , not good
So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling
lmfao inc ling
I'm fingering that trigger, don't play now.....that slim body a squirter
Spread the eagle, I'll get it on film but I'm not talkin bout Yung MA being a director
nah
Jabari means 'brave' I'm not really sure why they decided on that
I got tricks up my sleeve, fact....JB just more shook than a wizard without his hat
nahhhh
I got my hittas out all through the night & into the days
So when I say I got the kids looking for you they ain't involved in a fortnite craze
meh

Jabari had 1 clear miss
Incredible is getting better, definitely generating sim better concepts than before, but gotta figure out a way to execute better bro. He almost got arrested so I can understand if he’s a little shaken up and didn’t really have the motivation to write forreal this week.

Vote Jabari

[DynamiCz]

I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/

Nice opener

If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/

Nice

You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/

Funny lol

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You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni

This was actually coo

So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling

Lmao nice


Cool battle here guys. I got Jabari here edging it out by a jab. Cool read on both ends and props to both

V-Jabari

[DynamiCz]

I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/

Nice opener

If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/

Nice

You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/

Funny lol

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You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni

This was actually coo

So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling

Lmao nice


Cool battle here guys. I got Jabari here edging it out by a jab. Cool read on both ends and props to both

V-Jabari

[Twodrop]

Jabari Vote

I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/
Just 'ok' for me
If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/
fks w/ this.. lol
Ya son get his dome smashed in...got his head under my heel savage/
A curb stomp’ll have ya ‘kid face in the street’ like the cover of Illmatic/
not my favorite
I peel matics. You BAL’s leader’ til I start grippin MACs/
I’ll have the ‘liter shook’ with his insides oozing out when i twist his cap/
nah..
You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/
ok
It can get much worse...I’ll put the guns down if you think you can scrap/
A hook from Black’ll lay em flat...It’s no tramp stamp when I put Inc on his back/
coo nameflip, nice

You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni
thought this had potential to be more, but ok
Your only win was against a mental patient, your shit is out dated
You lack toasts and your style so spoiled I was just lucky to be the first to say it
yea the wp doesn't work, but I felt it could've worded different
So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling
this made me literally LOL, haha....
I'm fingering that trigger, don't play now.....that slim body a squirter
Spread the eagle, I'll get it on film but I'm not talkin bout Yung MA being a director
current, but na
Jabari means 'brave' I'm not really sure why they decided on that
I got tricks up my sleeve, fact....JB just more shook than a wizard without his hat
giggle worthy, but no
I got my hittas out all through the night & into the days
So when I say I got the kids looking for you they ain't involved in a fortnite craze
nah...

I enjoyed both verses for what it's worth.

Jabari got this one though.

v/ Jabari

[Blue Bayou]

Soery on my phone so cant do a bar by bar..

Ive got Jabari here.... some cool concepts, miss incredible, muff and inc on his back were all cool... wayy too many attack / gun bars tho

Inc... the inc ling was cool but a bit of a reach...yung ma was also solid.... but jabari was more consistent

Vote Jabari

[El Muffin]

’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/
(kinda played..but itsok)
If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/
(this was nice)
Ya son get his dome smashed in...got his head under my heel savage/
A curb stomp’ll have ya ‘kid face in the street’ like the cover of Illmatic/
(ok)
I peel matics. You BAL’s leader’ til I start grippin MACs/
I’ll have the ‘liter shook’ with his insides oozing out when i twist his cap/
(ehh ok)
You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/
(ha. true)
It can get much worse...I’ll put the guns down if you think you can scrap/
A hook from Black’ll lay em flat...It’s no tramp stamp when I put Inc on his back/
(ok)

consistent..no clear miss

incredible opener had potential but nah
lack toast was a miss
inc ling was dymb but it made me lol so yeah thats a quote
last 6 ranged from eh ok to nah

i got jabari here with a consistent verse with no clear misses

v/jabari

[GUDELJ]

Edit: nvm

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/
yup, possibly played but not to me
If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/
cool nice nameflip angle
Ya son get his dome smashed in...got his head under my heel savage/
A curb stomp’ll have ya ‘kid face in the street’ like the cover of Illmatic/
coo
I peel matics. You BAL’s leader’ til I start grippin MACs/
I’ll have the ‘liter shook’ with his insides oozing out when i twist his cap/
liter? Not sure on this one, shame had potential
You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/
good observational
It can get much worse...I’ll put the guns down if you think you can scrap/
A hook from Black’ll lay em flat...It’s no tramp stamp when I put Inc on his back/
solid

VS

Originally Posted by Incredible

You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni
meh not for me
Your only win was against a mental patient, your shit is out dated
You lack toasts and your style so spoiled I was just lucky to be the first to say it
see the angle wording killed any stong it could hope to have
So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling
lol i liked this. Its not a great punch in terms of hurting your opponent. But it leaned me cus i had no idea where it was going. Nice
I'm fingering that trigger, don't play now.....that slim body a squirter
Spread the eagle, I'll get it on film but I'm not talkin bout Yung MA being a director
ok at best
Jabari means 'brave' I'm not really sure why they decided on that
I got tricks up my sleeve, fact....JB just more shook than a wizard without his hat
this was gash bro no hate
I got my hittas out all through the night & into the days
So when I say I got the kids looking for you they ain't involved in a fortnite craze
ok i see the wordplay. Not a massive punch again though an didnt get the same props you got away with spread the eagle or inc ling

Tbh id give 2 quotables but whilst the inc ling leaned me you really lacked sting in this. But you got the foundations which the hardest part. Keep it up

Black, liked your approach. Consistent n solid verse. Props

Vote Black

[Barcotic]

Jabari
I’m Stationed on ya block with the Pump. If you ride up, ya life’ll end hoe/
Blast the windshield....I’m giving ‘Bucks through the glass’ like a cashier window/
played
If I miss you, ya fam gettin hit. Think The Incredibles movie when I’m blammin the stick/
Cus even if I ‘Miss Incredible’, the ‘arms stretch’ ya wife, n ya kids vanishin’ quick/
decent, coulda ben dope w/ a tweak in execution
Ya son get his dome smashed in...got his head under my heel savage/
A curb stomp’ll have ya ‘kid face in the street’ like the cover of Illmatic/
hit
I peel matics. You BAL’s leader’ til I start grippin MACs/
I’ll have the ‘liter shook’ with his insides oozing out when i twist his cap/
reach, weak
You a bitch in fact. In ya rounds you act tough, jerk/
But soon as I see you, you change up quicker than a Muff verse/
dece
It can get much worse...I’ll put the guns down if you think you can scrap/
A hook from Black’ll lay em flat...It’s no tramp stamp when I put Inc on his back/
dece again

0 gd punches
4 jabs
2 misses

vs

Originally Posted by Incredible

You claim you just started battling, he WWE, all foney
This junkie just stay on The Rock, I'm the future peoples champ, you'll switch to Jabroni
im all for wrestling references but not this one
Your only win was against a mental patient, your shit is out dated
You lack toasts and your style so spoiled I was just lucky to be the first to say it
miss
So keep talking loud and out of turn and I'll make the steam scream
Me implying that your gonna lose, is like I married in China, that's a Inc Ling
nahh man, wtf
I'm fingering that trigger, don't play now.....that slim body a squirter
Spread the eagle, I'll get it on film but I'm not talkin bout Yung MA being a director
no
Jabari means 'brave' I'm not really sure why they decided on that
I got tricks up my sleeve, fact....JB just more shook than a wizard without his hat
yikes
I got my hittas out all through the night & into the days
So when I say I got the kids looking for you they ain't involved in a fortnite craze
hah, now this was dope. more of this next wk

1 gd punch
0 jabs
5 misses

v/jabari black