East: 6. Alvin Karpis vs 8. ill nik-A - ILL NIKA WINS

Schadenfreude · 04-29-2018, 12:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official
Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles
Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise...
If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride
Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it
It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic
Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks....
You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week

versus

Quote:

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin
u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them
Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him
knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium
wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick
So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit
As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop
Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the block with the fire.... that’s also an Alvin Karpis head shot

Very close & a crazy clash of styles, y'all made it tough for Me to call a winner, tbh. I actually prefer Karp's style over Nik's, cleaner & harsher wording, in most cases, but I'm giving the nod to the old man this time; the creativity of his concepts put him over, so VOTE ILL NIKA.

Jabari Black · 04-30-2018, 12:16 AM

olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official
Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles

This was okay. Kinda funny.

In the chat you really act soft, you’re far from the last don
You need to strap on a pair, then toss out your pair of strap ons

I didn’t like this.

Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise...
If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride

Lol I liked this. The wp it’s pretty nice and that’s a funny line.

Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish
Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it

I get the Nic unit wp and in itself was fine but the execution was off. The “bitches cry” and “babies in it” doesn’t tie in well.

Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it
It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic

I don’t get the barcotic tie in.

Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks....
You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week

AK funny af lol. This a good line, I literally laughed at this one. Solid af.

Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude
My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food

I’ve heard similar lines but I thought this was decent.

beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin
u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them

This was just okay. The concept is very basic.

Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him
knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium

This was cool.

u used to pm me for Jordan releases so don’t gimme that I’m too old talk again
If I wear em it’s & like the OG still has swag... when u do it’s like that wardrobe goes better with moccasins

Purely a statement bar but it still was a light jab.

u tried hookin up with an Indian chick online, yeah, nice try yo
But that’s not why ya champ match success rate... has u tied to the Browns bio

This is pretty dope. Those are two good angles (the record and the online thing) and you wove them together well for an effective punch.

wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick
So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit

This cool. I liked the personal. The wordiness took away from the bar a bit hit it hit.

Wack bitch. My guns so big they make ya jerseys look small & my stick-ups great
Intimidate ya garbage... cans on the floor like gettin home on waste pick-up days

Garbage can/cannon flips have been done s lot. I think if you use a played concept you have to do it in s particularly creative way but I don’t think you did that here.

As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop
Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the block with the fire.... that’s also an Alvin Karpis head sho

Decent closer.

I liked this battle and thought it was very close. I thought Ill nik-a edged it by the slightest margin.

AK’s verse was funny and entertaining. He slightly had more misses than Ill though. Ill’s verse was also a bit more well rounded.

Mvgt Ill Nik-a

04-30-2018, 12:16 AM	#2
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles This was okay. Kinda funny. In the chat you really act soft, you’re far from the last don You need to strap on a pair, then toss out your pair of strap ons I didn’t like this. Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise... If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride Lol I liked this. The wp it’s pretty nice and that’s a funny line. Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it I get the Nic unit wp and in itself was fine but the execution was off. The “bitches cry” and “babies in it” doesn’t tie in well. Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic I don’t get the barcotic tie in. Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks.... You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week AK funny af lol. This a good line, I literally laughed at this one. Solid af. Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food I’ve heard similar lines but I thought this was decent. beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them This was just okay. The concept is very basic. Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium This was cool. u used to pm me for Jordan releases so don’t gimme that I’m too old talk again If I wear em it’s & like the OG still has swag... when u do it’s like that wardrobe goes better with moccasins Purely a statement bar but it still was a light jab. u tried hookin up with an Indian chick online, yeah, nice try yo But that’s not why ya champ match success rate... has u tied to the Browns bio This is pretty dope. Those are two good angles (the record and the online thing) and you wove them together well for an effective punch. wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit This cool. I liked the personal. The wordiness took away from the bar a bit hit it hit. Wack bitch. My guns so big they make ya jerseys look small & my stick-ups great Intimidate ya garbage... cans on the floor like gettin home on waste pick-up days Garbage can/cannon flips have been done s lot. I think if you use a played concept you have to do it in s particularly creative way but I don’t think you did that here. As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the block with the fire.... that’s also an Alvin Karpis head sho Decent closer. I liked this battle and thought it was very close. I thought Ill nik-a edged it by the slightest margin. AK’s verse was funny and entertaining. He slightly had more misses than Ill though. Ill’s verse was also a bit more well rounded. Mvgt Ill Nik-a