maturing

[2tripple0]

Roight this wasnt going anywhere you didnt actually make sense of anything..... you need to focus more on what your trying to write instead of trying to impress people like you could rhyme... or have sumn interesting to say which you presented i guess but i didnt get half of it... try coming back to reality whats actually happening in the story but whatever your just a twerp your not actually doing anything different to anyone else reading the story like people reading aint actually writing the story its ypur decision your just writing it....