Concrete 3-0 vs Suthaveli 2-1 - SUTHAVELI WINS

Cred · 04-02-2018, 08:29 AM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday APRIL 5th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

Concrete · 04-05-2018, 12:48 PM

Check.

You ready?

Suthaveli · 04-05-2018, 03:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Concrete

Check.

You ready?

I sure am nt.
Ext possibly.
Whas the magic number?

Concrete · 04-06-2018, 07:18 PM

another weakling bruised, vs Blue Bayou, man did you really lose
that verse was a sad attempt, no wonder voters was feelin' blue
meanwhile, I'm killings fools, 3 wins, going forth to lavish on kills
if you wanna 'settle the difference' you gotta establish some skills
my talent is ill, you aint managed to thrill, this I cant take serious
just because im up against Soot.. yall expect me to waste material?
forced plays, pointless lines, coming to battle you bring mockery
I don't care about all that jazz, obviously you cant Swing properly
makes me cringe awkwardly, peoples champ? nah lets be real here
couldnt push any weight, less you put Bostons ex in a wheelchair

Suthaveli · 04-07-2018, 12:52 PM

Booooi U need'a sit. Swig or'a liter sip & plead da 5th
No need to trip cuz da highlight W in ya win streak is against da G 2trip
Oookay. Just read ya verses & u aint winnin, no way.
Come chargin at me w.da bull & end up red all over ya face. Ole
Ya fragile, pussy boi. One touch & he's layin on deck
Weaved left & right on ya & ended up knittin ya a red shirt for non-contact
Con's da against violence type, possessin D rank skills
I'm pro pain distributin, gd at gettin grills outta mah business. Hank Hill

ill nik-A · 04-08-2018, 08:09 AM

Concrete. Blue line super played. Jazz, pushing weight all old.
Suth, red shirt was sick, ole was aight.

I got suth

Cred · 04-08-2018, 08:24 AM

Concrete: blue line was dated, settle the difference was to simple, didn’t like the soot line, jazz was alright n lol at Boston’s wheelchair

Suthaveli: lol @ opener, ole was nice, red shirt was koo, last one- coo self hype bar.

Vote / Suthaveli

Schadenfreude · 04-08-2018, 01:00 PM

VOTE SUTHERLAND
Con had great execution, but other than the closer, the concepts weren't adequate.
Jimmy had a couple heaters w/ 'ole' & 'red shirt', the opener & closer were meh tho.

Saint · 04-08-2018, 03:35 PM

Vote Suth
Ole & Red Shirt got it, nice concept.

Concrete -- Sry.. Jazz was aight.

Blue Bayou · 04-09-2018, 11:31 AM

another weakling bruised, vs Blue Bayou, man did you really lose
that verse was a sad attempt, no wonder voters was feelin' blue
not enough of a flip here
meanwhile, I'm killings fools, 3 wins, going forth to lavish on kills
if you wanna 'settle the difference' you gotta establish some skills
nah
my talent is ill, you aint managed to thrill, this I cant take serious
just because im up against Soot.. yall expect me to waste material?
okay concept.. setup multi is way off for me
forced plays, pointless lines, coming to battle you bring mockery
I don't care about all that jazz, obviously you cant Swing properly
lol this is cool
makes me cringe awkwardly, peoples champ? nah lets be real here
couldnt push any weight, less you put Bostons ex in a wheelchair
dece/mediocre

vs.

Booooi U need'a sit. Swig or'a liter sip & plead da 5th
No need to trip cuz da highlight W in ya win streak is against da G 2trip
great wording here, cool punch
Oookay. Just read ya verses & u aint winnin, no way.
Come chargin at me w.da bull & end up red all over ya face. Ole
lol cool flip of the bull concept, like this
Ya fragile, pussy boi. One touch & he's layin on deck
Weaved left & right on ya & ended up knittin ya a red shirt for non-contact
multi is way too off imo.. like the concept but feel like more ocouldve been done w it
Con's da against violence type, possessin D rank skills
I'm pro pain distributin, gd at gettin grills outta mah business. Hank Hill
pro pain / propane is ezboard days played but the flip was enjoyable I guess

cool short battle, Suth had the better verse.

Vote - Suth

04-02-2018, 08:29 AM	#1
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Concrete 3-0 vs Suthaveli 2-1 - SUTHAVELI WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday APRIL 5th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

04-07-2018, 12:52 PM	#5
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534020	Booooi U need'a sit. Swig or'a liter sip & plead da 5th No need to trip cuz da highlight W in ya win streak is against da G 2trip Oookay. Just read ya verses & u aint winnin, no way. Come chargin at me w.da bull & end up red all over ya face. Ole Ya fragile, pussy boi. One touch & he's layin on deck Weaved left & right on ya & ended up knittin ya a red shirt for non-contact Con's da against violence type, possessin D rank skills I'm pro pain distributin, gd at gettin grills outta mah business. Hank Hill Last edited by Suthaveli; 04-07-2018 at 12:55 PM.

04-08-2018, 08:09 AM	#6
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,411 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Concrete. Blue line super played. Jazz, pushing weight all old. Suth, red shirt was sick, ole was aight. I got suth __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-08-2018, 01:00 PM	#8
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	VOTE SUTHERLAND Con had great execution, but other than the closer, the concepts weren't adequate. Jimmy had a couple heaters w/ 'ole' & 'red shirt', the opener & closer were meh tho. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

04-09-2018, 11:31 AM	#10
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	another weakling bruised, vs Blue Bayou, man did you really lose that verse was a sad attempt, no wonder voters was feelin' blue not enough of a flip here meanwhile, I'm killings fools, 3 wins, going forth to lavish on kills if you wanna 'settle the difference' you gotta establish some skills nah my talent is ill, you aint managed to thrill, this I cant take serious just because im up against Soot.. yall expect me to waste material? okay concept.. setup multi is way off for me forced plays, pointless lines, coming to battle you bring mockery I don't care about all that jazz, obviously you cant Swing properly lol this is cool makes me cringe awkwardly, peoples champ? nah lets be real here couldnt push any weight, less you put Bostons ex in a wheelchair dece/mediocre vs. Booooi U need'a sit. Swig or'a liter sip & plead da 5th No need to trip cuz da highlight W in ya win streak is against da G 2trip great wording here, cool punch Oookay. Just read ya verses & u aint winnin, no way. Come chargin at me w.da bull & end up red all over ya face. Ole lol cool flip of the bull concept, like this Ya fragile, pussy boi. One touch & he's layin on deck Weaved left & right on ya & ended up knittin ya a red shirt for non-contact multi is way too off imo.. like the concept but feel like more ocouldve been done w it Con's da against violence type, possessin D rank skills I'm pro pain distributin, gd at gettin grills outta mah business. Hank Hill pro pain / propane is ezboard days played but the flip was enjoyable I guess cool short battle, Suth had the better verse. Vote - Suth __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

04-05-2018, 12:48 PM	#2
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158975	Check. You ready?

04-06-2018, 07:18 PM	#4
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158975	another weakling bruised, vs Blue Bayou, man did you really lose that verse was a sad attempt, no wonder voters was feelin' blue meanwhile, I'm killings fools, 3 wins, going forth to lavish on kills if you wanna 'settle the difference' you gotta establish some skills my talent is ill, you aint managed to thrill, this I cant take serious just because im up against Soot.. yall expect me to waste material? forced plays, pointless lines, coming to battle you bring mockery I don't care about all that jazz, obviously you cant Swing properly makes me cringe awkwardly, peoples champ? nah lets be real here couldnt push any weight, less you put Bostons ex in a wheelchair

04-08-2018, 08:24 AM	#7
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Concrete: blue line was dated, settle the difference was to simple, didn’t like the soot line, jazz was alright n lol at Boston’s wheelchair Suthaveli: lol @ opener, ole was nice, red shirt was koo, last one- coo self hype bar. Vote / Suthaveli

04-08-2018, 03:35 PM	#9
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,227 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	Vote Suth Ole & Red Shirt got it, nice concept. Concrete -- Sry.. Jazz was aight.