ATR: A.bove T.hese R.apists -all day maine!!! (collab diss)

[Geno]

Vulgar..
Yo, it appears weaklings have voices when the end of text hovers
You’ll get bodied in a large way, my twin glocks are Metts Brothers
Hip hop’s a dead number, but I’m not sweatin the decline
Cause gridlocked in vet cupboards, is its own conception in a shrine
I was blessed within a time, when up & comers had a paladin’s crest
A system of honor, a callous with breadth, a proving ground, challengers trekked
Who now crash and burned, Challenger’s ledge, ask in turn, it matters what’s left:
Ancient wisdoms at least a decade older than the pubic hair on Malachi’s head
I was born with a matrix-bent spoon that was dispatched in ghastly light
You were born with a silver spoon that Lama pawned before he sold out the site
How the fuck did I used to be Swansberg…but you’re the one trolling us all.
We’re golems with gall, you just hold a goal to tl;dr warfare as we know it…
Cause we’re the catapults when you’re the ones composing the walls
You’re swollen and frail, we’re Chyeahhh approved. Us fearin you?
We’ll slice your skulls like an Onion for bordering on the satirical
Geno’ll stab you in the throats & shit for babbling atrociousness
Could never get the fuckin’ hang of it…so the Gallows are appropriate

Objective..
Back off; I scalp kittens, ya'll soft & if this was the simpsons;
you made a crew of Ralph's and wonder why nobody listens.
Who cares 'bout kings if they're happy with bronze?
You can't battle our shit with an army of pawns.
We're pros, you're steadily defending the definition of cons,
You can't stomach your position if you're battling krohns.
You're wack as shit, so people talkin' crap aint odd,
And I'll drive over his crew 'till it's part of the paintjob.
Everyone got freedom writes but ya'll abuse it,
blind atheists praise God for you not doing music.
I make way for psychos to any pretend game,
I'm the opposite of Veritas the way I end sane.
Ya'll preachin' shit we reject, emo's aint reachin' perfection,
dead at your own game; but that's just a natural selection.

Geno..
Ok you natural bitch -so maybe hiphop really just isn't your move
Oughta play a saxaphone tho, the way you PM'ing gen singing the blues
Rediculous move, but fuck it -he's gone, even knuck can't stand fagots
So watch endsane buy a first class ticket, nd jump on his banned wagon
My clans had it, and I gives a fuck if u think ur better than me dood
Ur Nomads best, only cuz sik left with the rest of the inteligent people
Your way to fucking delicate, feeble, and those are unfortunate facts
Crew so down and out, that ur only feedback was your chorus is wack
Need to work on your tracks fore you fuck with this teams high..
Ur the shit tho, that's y creed gave barnes n noble customers pinkeye

[Nigma]

Vulgar straight up destroyed this piece.

I was blessed within a time, when up & comers had a paladin’s crest
A system of honor, a callous with breadth, a proving ground, challengers trekked"
"I was born with a matrix-bent spoon that was dispatched in ghastly light
You were born with a silver spoon that Lama pawned before he sold out the site

Damn broooo your whole verse was a very nice read. Not much in terms of criticism for ya!

Objective, not that your verse wasn't good, but following Vulgar it definitely felt like it was lacking in content to me. The paintjob bit was decent but the setup for it was lacking and your closing bit was alright too.

Gen, not too bad either, felt overall you were still basking in Vulgars shadow. I really liked the banned wagon wordplay, but a few other lines missed for me. You sacrificed a bit of flow to try and get some punches out and I think it would have turned out a bit more raw if a few more punches were worded nicer. Still a very adequate closer for an overall enjoyable read.

[Mike Wrecka]

Originally Posted by Genocide

Vulgar..
Yo, it appears weaklings have voices when the end of text hovers
You’ll get bodied in a large way, my twin glocks are Metts Brothers

too dope

good shit guys

[DLB]

lmao @ my twin glocks are Metts Brothers

[IamBenT]

BLASTING OFF, loving the flow, shit was hilarious

[Just Write]

This was pretty hard all the way around. Like the previous have stated vulgar just destroyed this but in actuality i think everyone else did an excellent job as well. Im on my phone so forgive the brief break down and sloppy format.

I was blessed within a time, when up & comers had a paladin’s crestA system of honor, a callous with breadth, a proving ground, challengers trekkedWho now crash and burned, Challenger’s ledge, ask in turn, it matters what’s left:Ancient wisdoms at least a decade older than the pubic hair on Malachi’s headI was born with a matrix-bent spoon that was dispatched in ghastly lightYou were born with a silver spoon that Lama pawned before he sold out the site

Along with the mett bro's line this was my favorite portion from u vulg, you're just a nasty dude with a gift for rhyming which definitely earned my respect.

Who cares 'bout kings if they're happy with bronze?You can't battle our shit with an army of pawns.We're pros, you're steadily defending the definition of cons,You can't stomach your position if you're battling krohns.You're wack as shit, so people talkin' crap aint odd,And I'll drive over his crew 'till it's part of the paintjob.Everyone got freedom writes but ya'll abuse it,blind atheists praise God for you not doing music.

This along with the ralph line was my fav, i think the word paintjob was a little sticky right there but still worked. I definitely dug your verse and the flow besides that was word was just top notch.


Ok you natural bitch -so maybe hiphop really just isn't your moveOughta play a saxaphone tho, the way you PM'ing gen singing the bluesRediculous move, but fuck it -he's gone, even knuck can't stand fagotsSo watch endsane buy a first class ticket, nd jump on his banned wagonMy clans had it, and I gives a fuck if u think ur better than me doodUr Nomads best, only cuz sik left with the rest of the inteligent people

This was just hard hitting and thats what i like about you geno, you dont write a lot of bullshit to lead up to your punches, you just trow haymakers all the time. The feedback about the chorus slayed me for real. Dope collab guys. Enjoyed the read and thanks for feedin my piece geno

[Geno]

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