Jerry Lee Lewis Had Great Balls

CopyPat · 04-01-2018, 12:19 PM

hahahhahaha, obviously awesome and i love the fuck out of it.
too many quotables, but flirty with sketchers stuck out for some reason. ha.

didn't read to me as smoothly as most have in the past but another re-read will probably help. i think also its because you switched schemes so often so it made it a little hard to catch the rhyme immediately and made me have to keep going back a bunch. my only criticism though, shit was rapid fire and original and fun. loved it.

didn't suck, thx

04-01-2018, 12:19 PM	#11
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahahhahaha, obviously awesome and i love the fuck out of it. too many quotables, but flirty with sketchers stuck out for some reason. ha. didn't read to me as smoothly as most have in the past but another re-read will probably help. i think also its because you switched schemes so often so it made it a little hard to catch the rhyme immediately and made me have to keep going back a bunch. my only criticism though, shit was rapid fire and original and fun. loved it. didn't suck, thx __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.