Alvin Karpis 8-4 vs DynaMicz 5-2 #1 CONTENDER - ALVIN KARPIS WINS

Enbombz · 03-25-2018, 03:36 PM

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
okay opener
I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore
I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours
doesn't read well
Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
basic but cool
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you
dont get it
After this L you’ll rage quit, we all knew you was ass cheeks
Fuck it, at least you’ll be the coolest Mic to sign out in the last week
its an okay angle but could of been done better

vs

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
tied in nice ak plays been done but it was good enough
My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
okay but wording hurt this
The heat propped.... single parent home, you might dont even see the pops
Big shots, the flat tommy change this bitch stomach.....think tea detox
don't get it, typo
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker
nice but wording again
See Alvin Karpis was a real gangsta, from you personally I dont get that feel
He just died from the steel, now a voice yelling "Alvin" in the house like Dave Seville
not really into this

Surprisingly this is petty close. Ak came lazy here tbh. Fairly clean and punchy as usual for the most part but was a pretty bland verse overall. Dynamic who? Tbh i thought you had the better concepts here, and did more with them as well. Your end rhymes need cleaning up, that did take away from a coupe here that if done better would of made this a clear v. I got dynamic who here though but i can see why it close.

03-25-2018, 03:36 PM	#1
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907773	All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em okay opener I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours doesn't read well Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit basic but cool You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true... I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you dont get it After this L you’ll rage quit, we all knew you was ass cheeks Fuck it, at least you’ll be the coolest Mic to sign out in the last week its an okay angle but could of been done better vs When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic tied in nice ak plays been done but it was good enough My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention okay but wording hurt this The heat propped.... single parent home, you might dont even see the pops Big shots, the flat tommy change this bitch stomach.....think tea detox don't get it, typo Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker nice but wording again See Alvin Karpis was a real gangsta, from you personally I dont get that feel He just died from the steel, now a voice yelling "Alvin" in the house like Dave Seville not really into this Surprisingly this is petty close. Ak came lazy here tbh. Fairly clean and punchy as usual for the most part but was a pretty bland verse overall. Dynamic who? Tbh i thought you had the better concepts here, and did more with them as well. Your end rhymes need cleaning up, that did take away from a coupe here that if done better would of made this a clear v. I got dynamic who here though but i can see why it close.