Waitress No. 666

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-15-2018, 09:02 PM

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... Topical contest verse written to the picture

Waitress No. 666

I met Lou Cypher on a fateful day in June at the age of 22
... Waiting tables at Diego's as a way to pay for school ...
He had came to taste the food that was famously consumed
By every famous name I knew in the land of Tinseltown

"Excuse me ma'am I'm Lilith Brown & I work for Mr. Cypher
Who demands you sit us down."

"Are you mad? You see this crowd? Not even Brad could get in now.
Even with a reservation you'll be waiting for a while. But there's always
Casa Vega and the famous Mr. Chow's ..."

She just grimaced with a scowl then she told me ...

"Listen, child ... Mr. Cypher is impatient so you better figure out ..."

Right before I kicked her out I heard the voice of Don Diego ...

"Get a table for Ms. Brown and a bottle of some vino ... dos lomitos 20 ounce
And make sure it's on the house!"

Thus I took her down the aisle to a corner in the back where she was shrouded
By the shadows and her face was nearly black -- she was sneering like a cat
& her eyes kinda glowed like a photo with the flash as I stumbled in the kitchen
For the dishes and to ask .. Don Diego who she was .. he just stared at me real numb
Then he told me ...

"She's a nun .. or at least she use to be .. until she came to Cali
On a mission of "belief", but what happened in between is a mystery it seems
Cos the next thing you know .. she's the "Mistress of TV" .. every filthy thing
You see, from the hookers to the fiends, all the pornography ...
And the vulgar imagery, both the monsters and the creeps ...
The Illuminati symbols and demonic symmetry on the television screen ...
Was influenced by producers who she tutored & released on the whole industry"

"But who is Lou Cypher?"

"Girl be careful what you speak?"

"But..."

"Hush ... that's enough. Plus, I'm sure they'd like to eat"

As he shoved me out the kitchen I was shaking like a leaf
In a Transylvanian breeze, felt a strain within my knees
And a cold bane of sweat as my face began to steam ...
Cos the closer that I got I could feel the frequencies
Of "satanic" energies ...

"Lilith who is she?"

Said a suave silhouette as his head nodded forward
And our eyes finally met .. he had a bronze kind of red
Like a fire when it danced and upon a second glance
I was lost within his trance .. all my flaws were in his hands
As he charmed me like a snake in Punjab, Pakistan ...

"She's a star ... I'm a fan!"

"More like harlot or a tramp ..."

"No, the next Scarlet Jo, Angelina, or Diaz ...
I can see it if you can't"

"If we get her out those rags and we put her in a dress
Like an Oscar del la Renta or Dior, then I guess. But of course ...
She'll need breast..."

"Then we'll make em more enhanced; but I'm sure that those legs
Could quickly start a war just like Paris"

"You mean France?"

"I mean Helen in the flesh ... she's so elegant and fresh!"

They so hellishly expressed every element of sex
As I stood there possessed by the Devil's eloquence

"Than I guess it's settled then ... I can get her scheduled in
On a Tuesday after 10"

"So it's welcome to the "bigs" ... Waitress Six Sixty-Six
My name is Lou Cypher and I rule the movie biz ..."

*In numerology 22 is considered a "master number" and deals with the manifestation of dreams as well as coming into contact with spiritual entities.
*Tinseltown is a nickname given to Hollywood in reference to the shiney, bright, and often times unreal nature of the movie biz.
*Lilith Click Link
*Lou-Cy-pher

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Ghost1 · 03-16-2018, 05:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ACTIVATE SELF

Suggested Viewing: NC Dark (skin)
... Topical contest verse written to the picture

Waitress No. 666

I met Lou Cypher on a fateful day in June at the age of 22
... Waiting tables at Diego's as a way to pay for school ...
He had came to taste the food that was famously consumed
By every famous name I knew in the land of Tinseltown

"Excuse me ma'am I'm Lilith Brown & I work for Mr. Cypher
Who demands you sit us down."

"Are you mad? You see this crowd? Not even Brad could get in now.
Even with a reservation you'll be waiting for a while. But there's always
Casa Vega and the famous Mr. Chow's ..."

She just grimaced with a scowl then she told me ...

"Listen, child ... Mr. Cypher is impatient so you better figure out ..."

Right before I kicked her out I heard the voice of Don Diego ...

"Get a table for Ms. Brown and a bottle of some vino ... dos lomitos 20 ounce
And make sure it's on the house!"

Thus I took her down the aisle to a corner in the back where she was shrouded
By the shadows and her face was nearly black -- she was sneering like a cat
& her eyes kinda glowed like a photo with the flash as I stumbled in the kitchen
For the dishes and to ask .. Don Diego who she was .. he just stared at me real numb
Then he told me ...

"She's a nun .. or at least she use to be .. until she came to Cali
On a mission of "belief", but what happened in between is a mystery it seems
Cos the next thing you know .. she's the "Mistress of TV" .. every filthy thing
You see, from the hookers to the fiends, all the pornography ...
And the vulgar imagery, both the monsters and the creeps ...
The Illuminati symbols and demonic symmetry on the television screen ...
Was influenced by producers who she tutored & released on the whole industry"

"But who is Lou Cypher?"

"Girl be careful what you speak?"

"But..."

"Hush ... that's enough. Plus, I'm sure they'd like to eat"

As he shoved me out the kitchen I was shaking like a leaf
In a Transylvanian breeze, felt a strain within my knees
And a cold bane of sweat as my face began to steam ...
Cos the closer that I got I could feel the frequencies
Of "satanic" energies ...

"Lilith who is she?"

Said a suave silhouette as his head nodded forward
And our eyes finally meet .. he had a bronze kind of red
Like a fire when it danced and upon a second glance
I was lost within his trance .. all my flaws were in his hands
As he charmed me like a snake in Punjab, Pakistan ...

"She's a star ... I'm a fan!"

"More like harlot or a tramp ..."

"No, the next Scarlet Jo, Angelina, or Diaz ...
I can see it if you can't"

"If we get her out those rags and we put her in a dress
Like an Oscar del la Renta or Dior, then I guess. But of course ...
She'll need breast..."

"Then we'll make em more enhanced; but I'm sure that those legs
Could quickly start a war just like Paris"

"You mean France?"

"I mean Helen in the flesh ... she's so elegant and fresh!"

They so hellishly expressed every element of sex
As I stood there possessed by the Devil's eloquence

"Than I guess it's settled then ... I can get her scheduled in
On a Tuesday after 10"

"So it's welcome to the "bigs" ... Waitress Six Sixty-Six
My name is Lou Cypher and I rule the movie biz ..."

*In numerology 22 is considered a "master number" and deals with the manifestation of dreams as well as coming into contact with spiritual entities.
*Tinseltown is a nickname given to Hollywood in reference to the shiney, bright, and often times unreal nature of the movie biz.
*Lilith Click Link
*Lou-Cy-pher

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This shit was crazy

Geno · 03-16-2018, 08:23 AM

Dude. Fucking love this. Right up myballey. Awesome

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-16-2018, 11:41 AM

Good looking out, fellas. I'm glad you guys dug it. And thanks for the feed.

Elemental P · 03-16-2018, 03:42 PM

Great read, liked how you kept your multi scheme going for a while before switching. Also like the idea of how Hollywood works and the Illuminati connection. Well written and at times the flow was off b.c of how I would read the quotes but after reading it thru again it made sense. Liked that you incorporated numerology but for the illuminati # I would have said 33 since that tends to be what the Freemasons use as their highest degree but that's my own discrepancy. Nice work yo

Darker Ego · 03-23-2018, 02:00 AM

Yow ama Hellish waitress
Botheter by the Devils lateness
We sacrificed a sheep and dinner is ready
Got guests coming in Jason with his gleaming machete
Spawn in the list to be catered and the spirit of Freddy
Feast on a dying essence to provide some lessons
To all it's bad expression but to our lives a blessing
Get ya head ripped off for trynna touch the sexy bitches
To be stored along burried snitches inside endless ditches
There is no way the competition can shine
Our table is bloody and stained because it is a shrine
Been here ever since the wickedest time
Got a crew of dead rappers spitting the rhyme
And chi flow powered furniture that we built in the mind
No entrance fee but you pay with your life
When the owner comes around stare like a wife
Proud and gallant topping the gnomes
Followed by creatures in the Grandest of homes
Hypnotising them in the calmest of tones
Got human parts ready for the frier
When God don't save he send them to the fire
You are all invited come in we are mad excited

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-23-2018, 10:33 PM

Are you trolling me, bro? Or did my piece just inspire you to write that? If it's the latter then cool. I'm humbled. You had some solid imagery in there. It kind of reminded me of Jadakiss's verse on the song Freddy vs Jason. Mainly, due to the intermixing of the gore and battle rap lyrics.

Just in case you missed it @Darker Ego
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrEQ2q7sGIs

Sidenote: I dig you're handle, man. It's pretty dope and esoteric. But, I think it be even doper if you dropped the 'er' off of Dark. Just my opinion.

03-15-2018, 09:02 PM	#1
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Waitress No. 666 Suggested Viewing: NC Dark (skin) ... Topical contest verse written to the picture *Waitress No. 666* I met Lou Cypher on a fateful day in June at the age of 22 ... Waiting tables at Diego's as a way to pay for school ... He had came to taste the food that was famously consumed By every famous name I knew in the land of Tinseltown "Excuse me ma'am I'm Lilith Brown & I work for Mr. Cypher Who demands you sit us down." "Are you mad? You see this crowd? Not even Brad could get in now. Even with a reservation you'll be waiting for a while. But there's always Casa Vega and the famous Mr. Chow's ..." She just grimaced with a scowl then she told me ... "Listen, child ... Mr. Cypher is impatient so you better figure out ..." Right before I kicked her out I heard the voice of Don Diego ... "Get a table for Ms. Brown and a bottle of some vino ... dos lomitos 20 ounce And make sure it's on the house!" Thus I took her down the aisle to a corner in the back where she was shrouded By the shadows and her face was nearly black -- she was sneering like a cat & her eyes kinda glowed like a photo with the flash as I stumbled in the kitchen For the dishes and to ask .. Don Diego who she was .. he just stared at me real numb Then he told me ... "She's a nun .. or at least she use to be .. until she came to Cali On a mission of "belief", but what happened in between is a mystery it seems Cos the next thing you know .. she's the "Mistress of TV" .. every filthy thing You see, from the hookers to the fiends, all the pornography ... And the vulgar imagery, both the monsters and the creeps ... The Illuminati symbols and demonic symmetry on the television screen ... Was influenced by producers who she tutored & released on the whole industry" *"But who is Lou Cypher?"* *"Girl be careful what you speak?"* "But..." "Hush ... that's enough. Plus, I'm sure they'd like to eat" As he shoved me out the kitchen I was shaking like a leaf In a Transylvanian breeze, felt a strain within my knees And a cold bane of sweat as my face began to steam ... Cos the closer that I got I could feel the frequencies Of "satanic" energies ... *"Lilith who is she?"* Said a suave silhouette as his head nodded forward And our eyes finally met .. he had a bronze kind of red Like a fire when it danced and upon a second glance I was lost within his trance .. all my flaws were in his hands As he charmed me like a snake in Punjab, Pakistan ... "She's a star ... I'm a fan!" "More like harlot or a tramp ..." "No, the next Scarlet Jo, Angelina, or Diaz ... I can see it if you can't" "If we get her out those rags and we put her in a dress Like an Oscar del la Renta or Dior, then I guess. But of course ... She'll need breast..." "Then we'll make em more enhanced; but I'm sure that those legs Could quickly start a war just like Paris" "You mean France?" "I mean Helen in the flesh ... she's so elegant and fresh!" They so hellishly expressed every element of sex As I stood there possessed by the Devil's eloquence "Than I guess it's settled then ... I can get her scheduled in On a Tuesday after 10" "So it's welcome to the "bigs" ... Waitress Six Sixty-Six My name is Lou Cypher and I rule the movie biz ..." In numerology 22 is considered a "master number" and deals with the manifestation of dreams as well as coming into contact with spiritual entities. Tinseltown is a nickname given to Hollywood in reference to the shiney, bright, and often times unreal nature of the movie biz. Lilith Click Link* Lou-Cy-pher There's more* Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 03-16-2018 at 05:49 PM.

03-16-2018, 08:23 AM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Dude. Fucking love this. Right up myballey. Awesome __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-23-2018, 02:00 AM	#6
Darker Ego Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 129 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Yow ama Hellish waitress Botheter by the Devils lateness We sacrificed a sheep and dinner is ready Got guests coming in Jason with his gleaming machete Spawn in the list to be catered and the spirit of Freddy Feast on a dying essence to provide some lessons To all it's bad expression but to our lives a blessing Get ya head ripped off for trynna touch the sexy bitches To be stored along burried snitches inside endless ditches There is no way the competition can shine Our table is bloody and stained because it is a shrine Been here ever since the wickedest time Got a crew of dead rappers spitting the rhyme And chi flow powered furniture that we built in the mind No entrance fee but you pay with your life When the owner comes around stare like a wife Proud and gallant topping the gnomes Followed by creatures in the Grandest of homes Hypnotising them in the calmest of tones Got human parts ready for the frier When God don't save he send them to the fire You are all invited come in we are mad excited __________________ ~Supernovas~ Cranial Maniacal Metaphorically Speaking™

03-16-2018, 11:41 AM	#4
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Good looking out, fellas. I'm glad you guys dug it. And thanks for the feed.

03-16-2018, 03:42 PM	#5
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507453	Great read, liked how you kept your multi scheme going for a while before switching. Also like the idea of how Hollywood works and the Illuminati connection. Well written and at times the flow was off b.c of how I would read the quotes but after reading it thru again it made sense. Liked that you incorporated numerology but for the illuminati # I would have said 33 since that tends to be what the Freemasons use as their highest degree but that's my own discrepancy. Nice work yo

03-23-2018, 10:33 PM	#7
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Are you trolling me, bro? Or did my piece just inspire you to write that? If it's the latter then cool. I'm humbled. You had some solid imagery in there. It kind of reminded me of Jadakiss's verse on the song Freddy vs Jason. Mainly, due to the intermixing of the gore and battle rap lyrics. Just in case you missed it @Darker Ego https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrEQ2q7sGIs Sidenote: I dig you're handle, man. It's pretty dope and esoteric. But, I think it be even doper if you dropped the 'er' off of Dark. Just my opinion.