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03-18-2018, 09:13 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Oslo
Posts: 179
Battle Record: 5-0
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quickie breakdown: 1st, aights personal. 2, okey, long ass line tho, could be worded more sharply. 3rd, again okay, not outstanding. 4th, cool idea, but is the tournique wordplay sound? 5th, alright finisher. Overall a decent verse, like the aggressive tone, could been better worded some parts, too bad you got stood up.
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