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Old 03-13-2018, 06:49 PM   #1
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Alright Mr URL..

See Gaslight don't know about how you've tried to fool ya peers
But you know all about gaslight..You've abused the biting rules for years
S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life
I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right
My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip
This a taste of your own medicine, Taken down a tier
This Mack to the side of ya head put more than a Flavor in ya ear
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Old 03-13-2018, 09:02 PM   #2
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Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain

decent, half the concept is played but i like the np aspect

I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic

ehh, too simple for me but not a total miss either

Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to

dope

Won’t hesitate to stab u. Permanent scars if u ever dodgin a fee
Think traditional tattoo - I’ll put a Knife Thru ur Heart so erybody can see

cool

Pop up at his fortress n I’m sprayin off wit tecs to hit em
At ur door step Bomb, blastin in ur face like Austin Texas victims

nahh

vs

See Gaslight don't know about how you've tried to fool ya peers
But you know all about gaslight..You've abused the biting rules for years

not bad, the tie in wasnt that great tho

S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life

ehh, too simple

I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right

cool

My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip

i hate "round" concepts, they dont even make sense & are overdone. other half of the concept was cool, but this is still a miss

This a taste of your own medicine, Taken down a tier
This Mack to the side of ya head put more than a Flavor in ya ear

nah man

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by about a bar n a half
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Old 03-13-2018, 09:41 PM   #3
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Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain
Nice opener
I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic
Loool good
Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to
Dope
Won’t hesitate to stab u. Permanent scars if u ever dodgin a fee
Think traditional tattoo - I’ll put a Knife Thru ur Heart so erybody can see
Cool
Pop up at his fortress n I’m sprayin off wit tecs to hit em
At ur door step Bomb, blastin in ur face like Austin Texas victims
Decent closer
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See Gaslight don't know about how you've tried to fool ya peers
But you know all about gaslight..You've abused the biting rules for years
Not feeling this
S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life
Lol nasty
I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right
Dope
My latest gun called Black Panther, I'm proud of this shit
I'll be Shuri see the New Tech before it go River Tribe n put a Round in his Lip
Cool, but you overstuffed it a bit
This a taste of your own medicine, Taken down a tier
This Mack to the side of ya head put more than a Flavor in ya ear
Predictable, but good closer
VOTE CRED Bombz was solid, but Cred's bars stood out more imo.
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Old 03-13-2018, 10:05 PM   #4
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Cred:

"Ratchet tucked, u ain’t man enuf. My bullets got good aim
Gas em up n I promise Diesel be part of Sour like a kush strain"

"I’ll knock u the fuck out. so don’t claim u got heart, stop it
Or I’m dropping shit quik wit more punches than u asked for.. aka Barcotic"

"Ur girl’s a slut too. Y’all argue why she don’t even fuck you
This is marriage counseling.. I’m the guy on the side ur bitch opens up to"

Enbombz:

"S.o.b think he can Bury me? This man is kidding right?
Better use caution, I got infinite ways to fuck you up worse than Finny's life"

"I'll blam this man for cash in hand, Take the shotty n I snatch a life
On my Altered Carbon shit, This just another body if the Stack is right"


I felt like both didn't bring their best. I have definitely seen better from Sour Joog, aka Enbombz. The black panther line kind of lost me for the rest of that verse, and I felt like Cred did a straight through overall better verse here. By me saying I have seen better I'm not saying its horrible by any means. Still was a decent battle to read. Props to both for showing early. Both went in ready just think Cred is the winner in this one.
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