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03-10-2018, 11:03 AM
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Pharmabro is pretty funny.
trump lines are hard to get good reactions cuz it's too easy/obvious. Rhyming 'battle' is another hard move because it's been done a lot Closer is dope. Opener and closer were good. I think you just gotta avoid going down familiar territory. Try some new ideas. Rhyming and construction were on point as well. Good shit.
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