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Old 05-28-2013, 11:09 AM   #1
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Lol. I think you should have made this into something more.
Whats present is good and i see flashes of creativity throughout but it ended pretty abruptly.
My favorite part was
Now i see just another blank face And our memories slowly drip down the drain Oh, the pain is fierce & sometimes to much to handle Just a damned fool with no place to go So i sink in what use to be as a way to cope ..... still got our pictures on my mantle The one with the dog and me in those brown sandles (You hated them, and sometimes thats why i wore them.. To spite you.)


Lol i wore em just to spite you.

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