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03-02-2018, 03:31 PM
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
Join Date: Sep 2015
Posts: 1,408
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VOTE INFILTRATE
Sourbombz was decent, your wording comes across as forcing it sometimes, mostly because you're focused on concepts, so I get it, just gotta polish up that wording. Inf is just the more experienced writer, he's learned to execute his high concept style too well. Once in a while his wording gets muddled, but the skill shows against lesser writers. Even tho he's a lame for taking the "shon" off his name..lol.
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