AOWL Spotlight Match: zygote (9-2) VS. Nigma (5-4)-- zygote wins, 4-1.

trap. · 05-27-2013, 07:26 PM

at first glace, nigmas read like a alternate journey through the fountain. i liked it because it gave me something to grasp on to and compare with. i read it a few more times and it was a good short story about paying it forward, in a sense - but in a spiritual fashion. as far as the technical aspect it was a little off-kilter in parts but the storyline was so good that i didn't even care much for that.

zygotes descriptive power is remarkable. adonis, he told you what it's about in the beginning CAPS LOCK. either way, i had to read the beginning very closely and even though i'm not a musician, i have seen enough concerts on tv to get everything you were vividly describing in an abstract, yet such a clear manner as well. the only part i really didn't like was the braggadocio type ending that really (in my eyes) didn't belong with the rest of the story.

i might be against the grain here this week,
but my vote is for zygote. pce.

05-27-2013, 07:26 PM	#8
trap. Senior Citizen Join Date: Aug 1997 Posts: 3,870 Battle Record: 4-3 Rep Power: 0	at first glace, nigmas read like a alternate journey through the fountain. i liked it because it gave me something to grasp on to and compare with. i read it a few more times and it was a good short story about paying it forward, in a sense - but in a spiritual fashion. as far as the technical aspect it was a little off-kilter in parts but the storyline was so good that i didn't even care much for that. zygotes descriptive power is remarkable. adonis, he told you what it's about in the beginning CAPS LOCK. either way, i had to read the beginning very closely and even though i'm not a musician, i have seen enough concerts on tv to get everything you were vividly describing in an abstract, yet such a clear manner as well. the only part i really didn't like was the braggadocio type ending that really (in my eyes) didn't belong with the rest of the story. i might be against the grain here this week, but my vote is for zygote. pce.