Krucial Th1rt3en (1-2) vs. bleak (1-6) - KRU WINS

Mr. J · 02-12-2018, 01:56 AM

Krucial I enjoyed the camp trip play & that closer but there is irony in that line as well...
otherwise this was a fair showing, the Mario line would have been cool but to me its eh.
good job...

bleak...you hit me the same amount of hits as your opponent, I didnt really enjoy the last 4 lines though...
that was eh to me as well, so you two are on equal ground right now in my eyes...
nice work though...

overall I think I have bleak winning this one, krucial had a few decent lines.
the camp line was oddly worded but seems cool just because of the visual you try to bring.
that ending was pretty goofy though. thats what me leaning with bleak even though Im sure someone gets those 2 lines.
decent battle.

v/bleak

02-12-2018, 01:56 AM	#14
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Krucial I enjoyed the camp trip play & that closer but there is irony in that line as well... otherwise this was a fair showing, the Mario line would have been cool but to me its eh. good job... bleak...you hit me the same amount of hits as your opponent, I didnt really enjoy the last 4 lines though... that was eh to me as well, so you two are on equal ground right now in my eyes... nice work though... overall I think I have bleak winning this one, krucial had a few decent lines. the camp line was oddly worded but seems cool just because of the visual you try to bring. that ending was pretty goofy though. thats what me leaning with bleak even though Im sure someone gets those 2 lines. decent battle. v/bleak __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you