Contenders Match: Swerve (5-3) vs. Alvin Karpis (5-3) - AK WINS

Problumatic · 02-11-2018, 07:00 PM

AK had some great set ups! Like the Canadian Dry bar. Dicks/clouds line was just plain hilarious. Swerve on Ice was alright. Boston/Throwback line was sick. Good line. Golden eye was aight. Real slick set ups and most of your verse hit hard. Nice work.

Swerve you had a good verse too. Start off with some decent wordplay on the opener(for battling/For Battling”.) Cleveland baseball team line had a decent concept around it but it wasn’t worded great and it stretched a little long than it should of. Zoro/One Piece like might be the best line in your verse . Shit was str8. Lol... alveoli bar was not what it could of been.. Olympic flame was OK.

I got this one going to Alvin K.

He was most consistent but it’s a close one regardless and both battlers came correct.

V/AK

02-11-2018, 07:00 PM	#13
Problumatic Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 79 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 6797934	AK had some great set ups! Like the Canadian Dry bar. Dicks/clouds line was just plain hilarious. Swerve on Ice was alright. Boston/Throwback line was sick. Good line. Golden eye was aight. Real slick set ups and most of your verse hit hard. Nice work. Swerve you had a good verse too. Start off with some decent wordplay on the opener(for battling/For Battling”.) Cleveland baseball team line had a decent concept around it but it wasn’t worded great and it stretched a little long than it should of. Zoro/One Piece like might be the best line in your verse . Shit was str8. Lol... alveoli bar was not what it could of been.. Olympic flame was OK. I got this one going to Alvin K. He was most consistent but it’s a close one regardless and both battlers came correct. V/AK