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Old 05-26-2013, 07:57 PM   #7
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ZY - first off fuck your format. Seems like you did this week like whatever, then you read it and shits dope. I mean the writing itself is fresh as hell, most of the wording and phrasing is just so abstract yet beautiful in a sense. I enjoyed the verse thoroughly, but if I'm being honest I really have no clue what its about. To me its almost a smorgasbord of thoughts on...well everything. IDK? I'm missing something or you're a genius. Good drop though, horrible format.


Enigma - I'm not grasping confidently who the character is, but crazy concept none the less. 'awake while I sleep' was dope. There were a bunch of dope wordings in this verse. I assume it's god meeting god and simply time traveling and teaching the young god how to create? IDK, but that's what I read and that shit is dope. I really have no complaints about this verse, usually I can find something small, but, in this case nothing. Good shit

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I think this was a dope fucking battle, you both came abstract, ZY more so, but Nigma had a extra element to his. I think it was the actual story and concept that got the vote. I'm not saying Zy did not, I'm saying it went over my head. Where Nigma didn't have the most up front take on the topic either, still, he executed it at a level that was clear enough to understand IMO.

Both of you, good shit.
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