Georgia

dull boy · 01-31-2018, 11:28 AM

I was a country boy; barefoot; running through the countryside.
Smile on my face, ’cause it was all about the fun in life.
Happy-go-lucky; plucky. Had his own puppy. Buddies
with the next door neighbors. A Rockwell painting
of a couple friends attached to the jungle gym out back.
Summers spent like Huckle Finn. For months on end we’d have
daily games of H-O-R-S-E on a faded, aging court.
Play-by-play reports by the players playing. Scores
kept in your head… The rain delayed no sport.
Tire-swings tied to trees where forts resided. These were norms
provided me. July; we’d treat the fourth to Hide-and-Seek and S’mores.
… lord. My wildest dreams couldn’t rival Springs I had before...

we moved to…

Geno · 01-31-2018, 12:32 PM

Dope takes me back man

Sammy · 02-01-2018, 08:33 AM

Ill. Nice Gaussian blur.

Saint · 02-01-2018, 11:23 PM

I'm at a loss here.

dull boy · 02-02-2018, 10:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration

I'm at a loss here.

Elaborate.

dead man · 02-03-2018, 01:07 PM

Pretty

dead man · 02-03-2018, 01:07 PM

Reminded me of "now is the hour"

It's a good book. Kinda strange. But good

Lyriscologist · 02-04-2018, 12:30 AM

I got a sling blade vibe from it.. good imagery though !

Saint · 02-08-2018, 05:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy

Elaborate.

It was a good drop. But WTC tho lol

ACTIVATE SELF · 02-08-2018, 06:45 AM

Nice onslaught of imagery. Fascinating read.

CopyPat · 02-13-2018, 02:14 AM

so dope.
left me hanging, wish it was longer
can read this style forever, loved it

made me happy and sad within seconds of each other lol good shit , so glad to see you're still here

Eŋg · 03-04-2018, 10:03 PM

succinct. flowed organically with impressive imagery.

01-31-2018, 11:28 AM	#1
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Georgia I was a country boy; barefoot; running through the countryside. Smile on my face, ’cause it was all about the fun in life. Happy-go-lucky; plucky. Had his own puppy. Buddies with the next door neighbors. A Rockwell painting of a couple friends attached to the jungle gym out back. Summers spent like Huckle Finn. For months on end we’d have daily games of H-O-R-S-E on a faded, aging court. Play-by-play reports by the players playing. Scores kept in your head… The rain delayed no sport. Tire-swings tied to trees where forts resided. These were norms provided me. July; we’d treat the fourth to Hide-and-Seek and S’mores. … lord. My wildest dreams couldn’t rival Springs I had before... we moved to… Last edited by dull boy; 01-31-2018 at 04:13 PM.

01-31-2018, 12:32 PM	#2
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dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Reminded me of "now is the hour" It's a good book. Kinda strange. But good __________________ Zack Wicks for president

02-01-2018, 08:33 AM	#3
Sammy Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 103 Champed - Write Week 7 Rep Power: 3415776	Ill. Nice Gaussian blur.

02-04-2018, 12:30 AM	#8
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95181	I got a sling blade vibe from it.. good imagery though !

02-08-2018, 06:45 AM	#10
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	Nice onslaught of imagery. Fascinating read.

02-13-2018, 02:14 AM	#11
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	so dope. left me hanging, wish it was longer can read this style forever, loved it made me happy and sad within seconds of each other lol good shit , so glad to see you're still here __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

03-04-2018, 10:03 PM	#12
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	succinct. flowed organically with impressive imagery.